a weekday is a weekday of lust
a weekday is a weekday of romance
a weekday is a weekend of a weekend lust
a weekday is a weekend of a weekend obsession
obsession is a weekend of obsession
obsession is a weekend of lust
love is a day to day obsession
love is a day to day romance
a day to day is a day to day obsession
a day to day is a day to day romance
a day of lust is a day of romance
a tale of love is a tale of the day
a tale of love is a tale of romance
a tale of love is a tale of lust
the tale of the day is the tale of obsession
love is the tale of the day
love is the tale of romance
lust is a tale of lust
lust is a tale of obsession
a weekday is a weekend tale
a weekday is a weekday tale of love
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Author:
lucifer very very very 1st (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 30th, 2019 15:09
- Comment from author about the poem: my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc... this poem is about in-between love,lust,and romance. i don't add capitalization's on my writing.
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Thanks FRIEND for a very intersting POETIC STYLE on a perrenial SUBJECT ~ Lust ~ Obsession ~ Romance ~ Love ! These are very *Old Fashioned Words* in the poetic vocabulary of LOVE ! We overuse capitalization and a Poem sans capitals & punctuation looks very very cool ! Repetition is important in Classical Poetry and your repetion of the *LOVE WORDS* and your additional repetition of *weekday* *weekend* and *day-to-day* *tale & tale of the day* makes this a great medievil (middle ages) poem !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
thank you for the time of day for your review,angela & brian! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
lucifer very very very 1st
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