I am guilty and see my mistakes
I've been bleeding all over the place
My last writting triggered something deep
How much alcohol was hated by all of me
This program ran from many unpleasant memories
What I had done but mostly what was done to me
I thought I'd forgiven it, until this last gift of happenings
Lost on seeing the outer world as all are unworthy
For this would now mean that I feel in my own world
All those I've judged was actually just myself
Theses words are an attempt, to adjust the vibration in my head
We are all in this together, just figuring out what's better
I thank ever soul for showing what I need to know
Hurt, pain, love and joy are all lesson of love
When we truly see one another as God's
Everything will fade away to become us
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Poetic Dan (
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Dan,
The wonderful thing about you is that upon an honest self examination, you hone up to the ‘hurt, the pain, the love and joy’ , and realize they’re all lessons to learn from! You seem to adjust those vibrations very well! Kudos! 👏🏻
Great message and video!
Have a great weekend!
~Laura~🌻
Just about to go into a festival called paddle round the pier and dance in the sun. I'm even going to have a beer, to really thank everyone but it will be only one.
Thank for your support over the years x
My pleasure!💖
Great!
Enjoy to the fullest and be happy! 🤗
All around you are people with similar wounds. You won't know them for they do not wear their heart on their sleeve. I expect many look at you and do not see who you are either.
The world isn't ready for us to see each other as gods yet. So what shall we see each other as when a look of disdain meets us along the high street?
Sadly I've only been out of the UK twice but I am told that in other parts of the world they do except that we all are God's.
Due to my poor English I had to look up your word "disdain" as soon as I read the meaning I thought how this word came around. Times are slowly changing, when each generation passes on their experiences.
Yes I can often think "is okay for them" not remembering, it would be far from good and we call be the great pretender 😉
Always appreciate your time
Stay strong, and don't loose a single moment to unworthiness.
A very poetic examination
Thank you my friend
Always appreciated
Your self examination is bringing you into a glorious life, once that examination is completed life will be glorious.
Is it not a never ending examination or could this be the last one, think I could feel another writting coming on...
Always appreciate the inspiration
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