Untellable.
Is it love or obsession
which takes an affair into the realms
of delirium ?
Steamy with untellable
dreams this feeling may reach extra
sensual dimensions.
By tossing objections
into ether's great distance as it heats
convention
to melting point may we then name it
obsession ?
Or would real love
not yield to the highly inaudible crackle
of charged atmospheres ?
Could it stay sane
yet intoxicated when flying for morsels
of the tasty surreal ?
When a sensation
races to sample stimulation again and
is hypnotically drawn
to lust's drugless narcotic is that which
remains frustration ?
Is it merely fixation
or could love be labelled a fraud while
acting as masquerade ?
Is this I have written
quite understandable or have I to put
it an easier way ?
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Playing with words again.
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A fine write Fay. I went delirious ages ago - upon the first 'swoony' poem I read on here! heehee. Can anyone help poor Orchi?!
Glad you enjoyed the read Orchi.
Love slumbers and relaxes into the everyday, camoflaged withing the acceptance of two. Only to rise like an empassioned jealous wilde beast, talons and fangs ready to throat rip in rage of pure blood boiling heat - once disturbed back into recognition.
A perfect gem of a comment and so poetic - - thanks a load D.A. for your visit and read about the mystery of unfathomable love.
You have certainly created magic here and these words are quite literally captivating and spellbinding.........
Neville
So glad to have captured your welcome attention with this read about lust verses love my friend. What a treat of a comment - - thank you lots and more........... Fay
pleasure..
Your stolen words from different mediums to emphasize the frustration of lusts desire for orgasmic explosion, cloaked as misguided love, is truly awesome
There is NOTHING simple about love but I DO KNOW
I haven't the energy for an affair I am loved out but I can relate to the equation of absession...
Great write fay
GOOD EVENING FAY : ANGELA here ! Its 10:30 am (Tuesday) and Im just catching up on MPS as I have an Evening Clinic ! Brian thought I should comment on this one ! We are not married yet (and dont cohabit !) so for us it is really *A Bridge too Soon !* However in retrospect in our *close encounter* during our trip to South Island we did glimpse the ecstasy of verses 1 2 3 & 6 ! But dont tell MY PAPA because ours really is REAL LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN🧡💙🧡💙
An amazing poem, Fay! I wish I knew the answers to the questions you pose. Wonderful!!
Wonderful write Fay, love can be a fraud but true love is sublime and within your words it can be found in spite of the temptations that are within the wold.
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