Thunder

Poetic Dan



I feel tired but I'm never going to fall,
As the rumble from the thunder reached down low

 

It showed me that I know how to clean house, leave no spirit of others so you can resonate yourself

 

I have the power and right to believe whatever I want, a work of fiction or not, it's ours to create on the spot.

 

I'm never saying I don't have any negative thoughts, they now just get thrown right out the door.

 

If you think I cut communication for bad thoughts, you'll need to take a second shoot.

 

The only entities I choose to remain, don't mess with the few of me inside my brain.

 

We take responsibility for our own life, no vengeance or violence comes to mind.

 

You can't trample me within the fear, as eventually all things will disappear.

 

I am here to be all that I am, following no others plan.

 

We are all just a "who" wondering over this land

 

With it written from the stars, right into our hand

 

To be everything that this living organism can

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 25th, 2019 01:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: The power keeps coming and I'm doing my thing!
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  • Laura🌻

    Dan,

    The positivity interwoven throughout your poem is infectious! I’m very happy for you! With this new attitude, the world is your oyster!

    ~Laura~

    • Poetic Dan

      Ha and would you believe I got hit with a negative blow as soon as I got up but I know its because I'm on the right track.

      Always appreciated
      Much love and respect

    • dusk arising

      Do you have room in your life for the imperfect? Can you tolerate the troubled minds of others? Are you able to make judgements which enable you to say - nothing. Will you acknowledge the pain of damaged souls beginning their path of self realisation.
      To all these i know you answer yes which makes you a compassionate and understanding human being. Walk the walk.

      • Poetic Dan

        That I am trying with every step and this morning I heard your words, take your time.
        As I began to write my emotions were under control and in dealing with people's projections on to dogs it is so important for me to understand where they are coming from.

        Work is a Beautiful healing feeling, always Appreciated!

      • Neville

        now that's more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long way....

        Neville

        • Poetic Dan

          That is does captain! I'm riding my own waves

          Always appreciated

          • Neville

            be sure I shall wave back to ya when you float by........

          • Fay Slimm.

            Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow of this meaningful message that being ourselves we face being responsible for our own life and for no other........ thank you for these thoughts Dan........

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you for seeing them, always appreciated my friend.



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