The sun rises in the east with loud colors
of oranges and yellows and reds
Waking gently the sleepy birds
that come and peck at my window
Vibrant life begins as nocturnal
animals slink back into their homes
The sun proudly shows off her warmth
and beauty as she has been in hiding
Today i will bask in her warmth
and enjoy lifes little miracles
As the sun warms our lakes and rivers
I will swim in the living waters
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 26th, 2019 00:34
- Comment from author about the poem: Another, maybe my last free verse.
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Wonderful write Christina, I do hope it is not your last free verse.
Oh we'll see....I guess I'll just try to write a poem and we'll see what happens! Thanks!
Here in U.K. we are having a heat wave with highest ever recorded temperatures (plse tell Mr Trump about global warming) and sadly people are taking to the waters and drowning.... even in London.
Please be careful in the living waters today.
A nice dawnings picture to contrast my dusk piece today.
Yes, I thought in was in nice contrast too 🙂
We have had a few drownings where I live also. Very sad!!
Thanks for your kind reply, dusk!--Christina
A fine write Christina. Cooeeee - you awake? My singing wake ya up?! lol.
Yes, your singing woke me up LOL... Thanks for the wonderful reply Orchidee!
Vibrant and beautiful bask in your glorious glow like the words you wrote.
Thank you
Thank you Dan for reading and leaving positive feedback. Appreciated---Christina
I'm with Goldfinch60 on this & all the way.....
Well, like I told him, I'll just try to write a poem next time and see where that leads me....Thank you!!--Christina
My pleasure...
Yawning dawn nudges us day creatures to wake-
- and take in a deep breath, as have your words
Thank you for your kind reply, suresh! Appreciated---Christina
Beautiful poetry- looking forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you so much. I am honored!--Christina
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