Penitent Prayer

orchidee



Tune: Heinlein

('Forty days and forty nights')

Psalm 38 v.16-22 parts

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Hear me, Lord, lest enemy

Should gloat and rejoice o'er me

They ready for me to fall

Hoping I will slip or fall

 

Yet I am in my distress

Ready here to fall no less

I sorrow continually

When will my help, release be?

 

I will now declare my sin

Come, forgive me, cleanse within

For my sin I be sorry

From my sadness set me free

 

My enemies they are strong

They trouble me all day long

They with evil good repay

Yet I will follow your way

 

Lord, forsake me not, I pray

Draw near to me night and day

Make haste t ohelp me, you be

My salvation constantly

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 26th, 2019 01:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 7.7.7.7. metre.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 42
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  • Neville

    only if one is truly sorry might they be allowed to forgive themselves...

    failing that..... there is always karma to look forward to..... N

    • orchidee

      Thanks N. Excuse me being facetious (quite a long word there!) - Who is karma?! (I wish I would shut up sometimes. lol).

      • Neville

        try Google and I aint talkin cricket...

      • Suresh

        Once realizing your error, and becoming responsible is all that is necessary

        • orchidee

          Thanks Suresh.

        • dusk arising

          I made a terrible error which was, at the time, beyond my control. It was all about allowing myself as a child to be brainwashed into believing i needed to worship a god because i should fear him.
          I saw the duplicity and backed away from the eerie men in dresses who had so mislead me.

          • orchidee

            Well I agree that there are some eerie men in dresses. The 'fear' here is 'reverence and awe'.

          • Goldfinch60

            Good one Orchi.

            • orchidee

              Thanks Gold.

            • Christina8

              Very nice Orchidee. I am in awe of how you make these everyday!----C

              • orchidee

                Thanks C.



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