Always & Forever
Forever in
your shadow
Wherever shadows lay
Forever in
your depths
As deep as they might be
Forever in
your depths and debt
For all eternity
What more
might a slave possibly want
discounting freedom….
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Author:
Neville (
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Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in warm allure .................. Fay.
Now ya got me glowing.... ta Fay...... N
My pleasure..............
A fine write Neville.
I thought it was gonna be a tortuous poem on my singing, with that title! heehee.
that'll teach ya to make assumptions wunnit ... ta for taking the time to check these words out.. N
Oh my, here writes a man who has surrendered his credit card to the lady of a dream he once had before bank managers chased him down the high street of his bankrupt finances and wizened now shares a warning to malekind.
Could have just written DON'T DO IT!
Tongue firmly in cheek of course. Another of your two edged beauties today.
I got a thing about the Sword of Damocles & living dangerously... Cheers DA.. another much appreciated visit... N
Neville,
Quite a read!
Interesting question...
“What more
might a slave possibly want
discounting freedom....”
I suppose it depends on the slave and the type of freedom the slave seeks!
~Laura~
Welcome and thank you Laura... maybe you are write to ask.... whilst I on the other hand am merely content to see you grace this page and leave a mark upon it ....... Neville
Neville,
‘Tis my turn now to say thank you for your complimentary comment! You do have a wonderful way to express yourself which I appreciate!
~Laura~🌻
4 more comments
This poem is very sweet. Instantly got me thinking of the slow song (the title did) but overall done very well!--C
then over all I'm a winner.. thank you kindly ma'am.....
We are all slaves of our desires and our circumstances.......
...... so whence is freedom
.....in dreams
Well penned my friend
You are absolutely right..... and I thank you for it Suresh
Neville
Neville,
You are magical with your pen- you have written an exceptional piece here. Wonderful job, my friend.
-L
and you have just made my evening.... thank you so very much for visiting these words, your encouraging comment, and for making me smile...... Neville
Lovely write, simple yet complex all at once
Now aint that summat.... cheers SerenWise.. I am most grateful to you for the visit and encouragement....
So few words used but the complexity comes through showing how the complexity of love can enslave you. Brilliant.
You are far too kind & have a heart of gold sir...... N
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