A gentle sun peeks from the clouds
as we go in the water to wade
We hurry to our favorite spot
before the afternoon begins to fade
No swimming for me today
Not warm enough to take the dive
This place ~ surrounded by sand
dunes, makes me feel so alive!
Minnows flash over my feet
and a dragonfly speeds by me
Natures majesty is in this place
An afternoon extraordinary!
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 27th, 2019 00:09
- Category: Nature
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well worth the wait .. it seems you did have a delightful afternoon..
I can almost feel the gentle warmth of the sun, a light breeze and the tickle of those minnows....... that's nature & poetry for ya folks.... Nice one Christina..... N
Thanks so much! It was a delight. I appreciate the kind words! Christina
my pleasure as always..
Our special places in nature are so wonderful.
They are! Thank you for your reply, Christina
Your pen paints the picture of paddling with minnows so clearly I could feel my toes being tickled Christina. A perfectly lovely read.
Thank you so much Fay! I really appreciate the read!--Christina
A fine write Christina. You getting out more, as they say?!
Yes, I suppose. Thanks for the kind reply Orchidee! Christina
Oooo I saw a dragonfly a few weeks ago, it confirmed alot to me. Glad to see we are both breaking free, loving life and to breathe.
Thank you for reminding me!
Thanks for a wonderful reply Dan! Appreciated--Christina
I am envious, such happy memories you have brought to my mind with your writing today. Wonderful times, remember to re-read your work in thirty years time.... i hope it brings the days joy back for you.
Wow, I didn't think of that! Thanks for your positive reply, dusk!--Christina
Christina,
That extraordinary afternoon sounds divine! Experiencing nature in the manner you’ve described is dreamy!
~Laura~
Thanks Laura! Appreciate your kind reply as always! Christina
i love your style
Well, I appreciate that very very much GON! Will check your poetry. Christina
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