We used to talk all the time
All-day, all night
We were so close
I could tell you anything, and you wouldn't judge me
Now I feel as though we're strangers
We don't talk
Will things ever go back to how they were?
What happened to us..?
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Author:
vanessa wallace (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is pretty straightforward. I feel as though I'm losing my best friend. It feels terrible.
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Good emotive write, I do hope that gap between you closes and you are friends once more. Good friends are so important in our lives.
Thank you. I like to include emotions in my work to make it stronger. I hope that our friendship works out as well.
You are still a young person and both you and your friend are going thru a lot of changes as you grow to adulthood. Friendships change as years pass and new friendships are formed. As you age you will take this in your stride.
Meantime i find your writing exceptional. Your discipline is remarkable. I really believe you have poetic talent way above your years judging by this piece.
You're right. I hope our friendship lasts though.
Thank you! I really appreciate it. I have been writing for such a long time, it's how I can truly express myself.
Maybe you should let her know how you feel....good emotional write!
I want to, but I don't know how to express it. Thank you! I appreciate it. 🙂
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