What Happened?

vanessa wallace

We used to talk all the time

All-day, all night 

We were so close

I could tell you anything, and you wouldn't judge me

Now I feel as though we're strangers

We don't talk

Will things ever go back to how they were?

What happened to us..?

 

 

  • Author: vanessa wallace (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 27th, 2019 02:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is pretty straightforward. I feel as though I'm losing my best friend. It feels terrible.
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • Goldfinch60

    Good emotive write, I do hope that gap between you closes and you are friends once more. Good friends are so important in our lives.

    • vanessa wallace

      Thank you. I like to include emotions in my work to make it stronger. I hope that our friendship works out as well.

    • dusk arising

      You are still a young person and both you and your friend are going thru a lot of changes as you grow to adulthood. Friendships change as years pass and new friendships are formed. As you age you will take this in your stride.
      Meantime i find your writing exceptional. Your discipline is remarkable. I really believe you have poetic talent way above your years judging by this piece.

      • vanessa wallace

        You're right. I hope our friendship lasts though.

        Thank you! I really appreciate it. I have been writing for such a long time, it's how I can truly express myself.

      • Christina8

        Maybe you should let her know how you feel....good emotional write!

        • vanessa wallace

          I want to, but I don't know how to express it. Thank you! I appreciate it. 🙂



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