Our home is like the tardis, I've put a magic ribbon on the door
As we walk in everything is forgotten, becoming what we want
Seeing the world in fresh new eyes, spin around to upside down
There's music inside every thought, a dance within every step
All you have to do is believe, have faith within your chest
Whatever you want it to be, dreaming endless possibilities
My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me
I pass this message on, to any that are still lost
We all have the wisdom of many, dimensions in us
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I used to tell my first two children we had a magic front door and when you stepped in everything became better, they never failed to believe, I just let life control me. I've forgive myself for not being able to keep a family home but together we made it and now we have a new castle to roam. With another light blessing on her way to remind us all where it begun, in love, joy and laughter living life to the full, believing anything you want!
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Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you've created something special both for us to read today and in your family's life forever.
This is by far the most moving piece i have seen from you Dan.
"My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me"
Those two lines are a thing of such beauty.
I got a knot in my throat reading your words and feelings where mine came from. Healing is slow and I\'m taking my time remembering all the little rhymes.
In each tear wash away my fear, thank you my friend.
Always appreciated
Ditto to what d.a. said....
now the time has come to take your poetic self and explore the nature.
Absolutely that side of me is now been set free.
Always appreciate your words on my journey
It is beautiful...what you have created for your children....a safe haven that many do not have. This is a powerful write and I thank you very much for sharing!!
Thank you so much to reading and being here with me on this journey.
Always appreciated
Wonderful write Dan, your life is now in a magic place, it is home, home is always a magical place and your home is obviously filled with love and joy.
Thank you my friend, so wonderful to read yours and others thoughts this morning. I am finally home again
Read several times now and I think this page is privy to some of your personal values, dreams and belies that may not be evident just by reading ..
These words need to be considered slower than just a casual read or flick through.. Note to those who may follow... Enjoy them and leave your mark for a guy who is determined to move forward... N
You leave a mark ever time captain, my sailing got smoother when came to this place.
As each soul gives much guidance
Always appreciated my friend
am smiling big here...
You speal of dimensions, magic, dreaming endless possibilities, your children with the key and the rest of everything till eternity. Good and vibrants resonations full of golden joy. Dan, you are the man, Proud of you, Buddy...
Wow, that a magnificent comment my friend. Filled me with more pride than my morning tea, I could never thank you enough for joining me.
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