Didn't mean to break your heart
Didn't mean to make you cry
Wasn't prepared for the look on your face
When you turned to me and asked "why?"
Sometimes things aren't meant to be
And I wasn't trying to be cruel
Seems like we were more friendly
I wasn't taking you for a fool
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: No matter how old we are, I think we have all endured a heartbreak or two......this is by no means recent
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In our lives there are breakages within us but they can be insignificant once the true person in your life arrives.
Good write Christina.
Absolutely! Thank you Andy!--Christina
A nice write Christina.
Thank you Orchidee!
A heart that breaks can to an extent also heal and the humble contrition in this verse would surely help that process along - - a good reminder for us readers dear Christina.
Thank you so much Fay! Humbled by your reply. Christina
But ya never forget, do ya....
this is a little peach of a poem well penned.
Neville
Nope! Thanks for your kind reply, friend....C
not kind.. but certainly true.. N
Tis a fact of life that more relationships fail than last. Experience enables us to accept this and realise it takes two to tango. Ending always will be a trying time no matter which side of it you find yourself upon.
Your piece clearly demonstrates how awkward it is to end a relationship with the intent of causing no pain and of course there is the lasting guilt of feeling you have hurt someone who was so nearly the right one once.
Wow, did you hit the nail on the head! Thanks so much for your thoughtful reply dusk!! Christina
Simple yet powerful, and very well written.
Thank you so much PB! Much appreciated--Christina
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