And They Called Her Iris
As a rainbow she appeared
And then as one
They each fell
Hopelessly in love with her
One upon one, upon one
Upon one
Until all her beauty
Was revealed
And then they named her Iris
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: 1 Iris = an ambiguous color term, usually referring to shades ranging from blue-violet to violet 2 Iris = Greek Goddess often represented as a rainbow 3 Iris = The coloured part of the eye
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Ah - my favourite shade is violet
and thanks for the info. on such a lovely Greek Goddess. Well maybe her beauty was revealed but that Iris used her tints of change to her own advantage methinks --- A tale told expertly as an intriguing weekend read but I then expect no other than alluring mystery from thee mon ami............... Fay
thank you both kindly and muchly my friend.... I had a job trying to get this little scribble formatted the way I had originally intended... and unfortunately gave up in the end....
It reminded me of the u2 song iris.
Clever write.
thank you for alighting upon this page , albeit momentarily .. yet having now left your mark, maybe for all eternity..... N
See there you go, clever again!
am smiling big again my friend & thanks to you...
You just made me cry, rainbow sprinkles.
Thank you!
Ha ha... happy tears indeed.. bless ya my friend & big thanks too.... N
A fine write N. I will leave my mark for all eternity - in singing - but that can't be helped! lol.
I'll pop in more than momentarily. I'm a pest! lol.
your self awareness and insight are a credit to your species sir.... cheers
I'll stick with the rainbow mate. A different coloured lady for each day of the week and always vibrant. Besides i get to nuzzle the crock of gold down there at rainbows end..... Iris - shhmirishh my boy.... variety.
Good luck sir and thank you for stopping by to admire the view... or views... N
A beautiful poem...I love the ending! I really wish I could come up with a more educated comment to do this justice but "beautiful" is all I have beyond whats been said...C
your comment is absolutely fine by me.. indeed more than... any more educated & it would probably fly above me.. so thank you my friend and true...
My pleasure....C
If this is what you come up with when you give up, maybe you should give up more often and let the creative juices flow, and flow and flow some more
I am smiling so hard my face hurts.. thank you my friend.. what a luverly thing to say....
That beauty matches the words in your poem Neville.
thank you kindly GF60 ... much appreciated ..
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