Strange! Come see "it" in my brain

Poetic Dan



If you think my appearance is something strange, you should come take a look inside my brain.

 

Sometimes you'll see it not absorb any words, other moments it will repeat them so much it will think it was ours.

 

Then comes the rhymes that never fail to flow, good or bad they will always go. Building and destroying many wonderes things, in the blink of an eye it's nothing or everything

 

I've just gone for it all of my life, no need for asking how to do it right. Crying when I'm told to be tough, loving when I'm asked to give it up.

 

There is so much energy from people in this world, that keep singing, drawing and playing with "it's" swirls. Every new day I'm beginning to understand "it" more, I have the power to actually change "it" at the core.

 

For that is my "it", not yours. We all have our own rabbit hole to find, what tricks "it" plays are unique to us. There are no rules but no one talks about the club, "it" will never get above ground if we don't look up.

 

Now when people say I have "it" I'm thankful for where I've come from, when people say I've lost "it" I know what they see. It's just their imagination, running away with me.

 

As "it" is everything and nothing, going on for eternity. I'm not thinking we're only human, my brain is saying we are the glue that lives and breathe

 

Thanks for seeing my galaxy, where there's no fire just electricity. To fast for the eye to see, must be why we need to dream. To then awaken "it" in our reality

 

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 29th, 2019 03:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just taking a trip, it's okay to mention "it"
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Comments4

  • Suresh

    -and that's what individualizes us, the 'it', that is uniquely us.

    Trust me, you have an artist in you, that so uniquely gives expression

    • Poetic Dan

      That gives me a smile from ear to ear!

      Truly appreciated, knowing normal is not here!

    • PoeticBiscuit

      You’re very much unique. Each write you share with us sends me on a journey that I didn’t even know I needed. Keep up the good work.

      • Poetic Dan

        Ditto my friend, pen warriors is what we need! Glad to meet you on this journey

        Much peace and respect

      • Goldfinch60

        Our brains hold the thoughts and differences between us all.

        • Poetic Dan

          What beauty that difference is my friend, mind, heart and soul.

          Always appreciated

        • dusk arising

          I used to wonder what my appearance conjoured up in peoples minds. Then i realised there was no point in wondering because what people read into our appearance is totally in their head from their background and has very little to do with what i really am... so sod them LOL
          I think that's how it works for you too.
          I'm becoming quite a fan of your videos Dan.
          I'm pleased to read that your writing is helping healing thoughts in other readers minds judging from comments..... how you have moved yourself and others along with your 'open soul' poetry.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you buddy my picture is very pleasant put firm with the most friendly vibration of you. It would be nothing like I have thought and I guess that's the beauty in it and even then it can change when you see the emotions act out of behind close doors.

            Yes I still am so shocked that I too can inspire, no matter how much its said the reflection is a wonderful insensitive.

            I'm never sure on the videos too, so very much appreciated with the comment.

            My pages are turning, thank you for joining me.



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