Any Colour at All
Hey you
Don’t go
Changing colours
At least not yet
I need to see you
In the pink
My precious
Gold and green
Before I die
Hey you
Don’t go
Chasing colours
The way you
Used to do
We are way
Off camera babe
I know
Just how much
You need
To be watched
Relax my little one
Come enjoy
The gentle pressure
Of these calloused
Finger tips
Then let my tongue
Show you how
And where to bleed
Hey you
There really is
No other
Quite like you
Maybe going blind
Is no such
Bad thing after all
I shall miss them tho
Those colours
That remind me
So very much of you
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Author:
Neville (
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Brilliant we will never truly appreciate the all the colours until they are gone!
thank you Dan.... you may of course be write..... you certainly aint wrong..... Neville
Touch penned so well and the rest though fired through with pathos gives multi-colourful meaning to special closeness......... another gem of a read Nev................. x Fay
Thank you kindly and muchly my friend....
I have to agree here with Fay. Your contrast of loving reveals the ;amdscapes of though which are totally showered in a colourful and delightful love affair. Top write, Mr Neville...!!
Cheers sir... Have a great weekend now wont ya ...... Neville
I've just had 2 teeth removed so been having lots of pain. Back up on my feet today after sleeping the pain away...Have a great weekend, also....!!
Ouch..... my wife has a dentist in Bath & we were there yesterday.... hope ya feel better real soon...
Whether its the drugs i'm on i dont know but... reading yours and others poetry inspires me to write.
My initial response/comment for your piece today has become a piece i will post today, obviously inspired by your poem.
Yours is another of your atmospheric super writes today.
Another win win then... I believe it is all about helping each other.. and I am made up for us both..... N
A fine write N.
thank you squire.. many thanks indeed....
Hello Neville,
What a beautiful poem.
Just visited Kew Gardens today and saw plants, fauna and foliage in all their glory.
Stunning colours all of them.
Keep writing FineB
What a great place to visit... I have been several times.. Many thanks for taking time to consider these words and for the kind sentiment you left behind... N
This is a wonderful write! Beautifully penned with a spritz of sensuality.
Cheers Christina8 you are indeed most kind.... What can I say except thank you... Neville
Super write Neville, colours are so important in our lives, may the colours in your life never fade.
Many thanks my golden friend... Neville
From three basic and two extremes, (five), are painted all the hues imaginable and conceivable. Yet, the color of love, is a hue, indivialized by each lover, as has been done by you.
you are just too damned good for words, but I dont have anything else to give you except a big thumbs up and thank you made outa them...... thank you my friend.... Neville
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