Underwear
Her slip it slipped
Significantly
Her shift it shifted
Slightly
Where would she have
Me rest my head tho
All be it laid
So very lightly
Come my love
Pray tell me do
Beneath the quilt
And show me where
Somewhere neath
Your underwear
Come unto me and
Show me where
Pray show me
Show me show me
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ...... just playing with words.... and avoiding boxes... N
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i am sure that she will show you Neville, just be patient and it will all be worth it.
it almost always is....
bless ya my fine feathered & good hearted friend from the very tip of ya bill to the bottom of ya tail......... Neville
ANGELA HERE ! Thanks Neville for a bit o' Sauce on a Sunday ! Orchii & Fido will demand an 18 ! Lingerie is very very important to us Girls - even though only the favoured few get to see & touch it. As for the secrets it conceals - in my case - thats for BRIANS EYES ONLY !
Blessings & Peace - ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
thank you Angela for the visit here and for stoking my imagination... lucky Brian.. send him my regards too... Have a great Sunday both.... Neville
A tease of a read if ever there was one - - proper job (as we Cornish would say) this pleasant playing with words sans the unwelcomed boxes - -ha ha - -under where went that underwear when resting your head my questing friend ?
thank you Fay and girt best wishes to you this Sunday... do you use girt in Kernow....
the box I was trying to avoid was the 18 + one.............. N
Yes I know re the 18 box -- a dreaded item for the likes of yourself methinks !!!! and yes the word 'girt 'is used here too but usually with a sting in its tail from an irate Mum to her lad - "come 'ere you girt ideeit you" - however the wishes for a girt Sunday will do nicely - - and thank ee me 'ansum............ Fay
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If she shows me, I'm likely to swoon. She said 'You show me yours, and I'll show you mine'. Swoon!
Fido doesn't want me to show! lol.
Fido knows what's best for the world....
Cheers O....... N
Of course she meant - 'You show me your Scrap Book collection, and I'll show you mine'. I dunno what else she could have meant. Hmmm.
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Asks the man who knows exactly where and when..... teasing poem.
Darn.. ya saw write through me... cheers me friend & truly............. N
Very playful poem. Cute, you playing coy. Very good!
I am a coy boy... Cheers Christina
Neville
Hello Neville.
A good write and entertaining play with words
Keep writing
FineB
thank you .... N
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