Christina8

Summer Daze

Summer is fleeting

And so are the tourists

The sun will soon be farther away

 

Nights will get chilly

and school will have started

Long gone will be hot summer days

 

Put the bedspread back on

Plug the blanket back in

Make it comfy where I lay

 

I get drunk on the very thought of you

Stop looking at me the way you do and

Please, please, have your way

Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Summer is brief but the glory of Autumn (my favourite time of the year) will soon be upon us.

    • Christina8

      Autumn surely is a beautiful time of year! Thanks andy---Christina

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ha - - that final stanza came as as lovely surprise - after reading that cold and dark nights days are afoot getting drunk on thoughts of love sounds just right to keep warm....... a delightful poem Christina.

      • Christina8

        Thank you Fay, I appreciate the read and the kind reply---Christina

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        HOLA Mi Hermana Bonita Christina - Angela aqui ! Gracias por tu Poema d'Amor preciosa ! Its Winter here (16C = 61F @ NOON) you would love Aucklands sub-Tropical CLIMATE (Like Florida) no ICE or SNOW in WINTER ! Summer is transient but we love AUTUMN and come OCTOBER I really will have my TRUE LOVER to keep me very very warm ! We are both fortunate to have met someone who loves us TRULY & TENDERLY (see our todays Poem !). I love every word of your Love Poem it sounds just like my feelings for Brian ! We wont need an Electric Blanket in Auckland but we might back in Essex in October !

        Abrazos y Besos a Tu y Tu Familia
        Con Amor - Tus Hermanos ANGELA y BRIAN
        ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

        • Christina8

          Thanks Angela for the read and the fantastic reply as always. abrazos y besos a tu y tus!

        • Neville

          Frightening isn't it.. autumn will soon be upon us and you introduce that reality in such a poetic way...

          Your last stanza is very inviting too... I imagine there is a very lucky fella blushing somewhere....

          Neville

          • Christina8

            Well, it does stink that summer is almost gone.....The cold nights are very inviting though. Thanks so much for your fine review!! Christina

            • Neville

              pleasure

            • PoeticBiscuit

              This one kind of outlines the feelings Iโ€™ve been having. My anxiety has been slowly rising as college once again begins for me. Another amazing poem though, you keep on writing and Iโ€™ll keep on reading!

              • Christina8

                Amazing? I really appreciate that as I felt as it was barely worth typing out. I really thank you for your support. Thanks for reading and the kind reply!!--Christina

              • Suresh

                Is he the blanket, the warmth you seek

                • Christina8

                  uh, I hadn't really thought of that, I just thought of the cold nights and what fun they'd be. Thanks for the read and the kind reply!--Christina

                • dusk arising

                  Oh jeez did i smile then laugh with pleasure reading you today.... that last verse is priceless.....

                  ...... i love it when a woman says stop looking at me like that.

                  • Christina8

                    Thanks! LOL I appreciate so much the read and wonderful reply DA!!--Christina



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