Dreamworld Acrostic.

Goldfinch60



Days of beauty in the

Realms of Nature giving me

Everlasting glory and wonder

As my life continues showing

More wonder of life where

Walking with it brings me

Overriding joy in my soul

Raising the glory that

Leads me into my

Dreamworld.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 5th, 2019 01:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just dreaming.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 61
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  • orchidee

    I suspect it's only partly a dreamworld, and you're near to God still, seeing His works in His creation - and He near to you too :).

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi. I agree I know My God is always there it is the way God is pervade in religion, especially Christianity that I have issues with.

    • Neville

      these dont get any better sir... well bloomin done ........ N

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Your steps to wonder come through every line dear Andy -- a lovely read.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Fay, much appreciated.

        • FineB

          Hello Goldfinch60,

          Thanks for this great mystical write into Dreamworld!

          Keep writing
          FineB

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you FineB. Those dreams are always within us.

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks UNCLE ANDY (Brian here) we all seem to be Dreaming today ! You in to Dreamland ~ Katie into Neverland ~ Fay into Loveland ~ Christina into Autumnland and US into Tenderland ! Still in our experience People who cease to Dream ~ also cease to Live ! Thanks for sharing BACH great Piece great Pianist ! Very smooth seamless ACROSTIC ~ AMEN !

            Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
            Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

          • Suresh

            I often get lost in my dreamworlds, and wish to never return, but reality is a b****.
            Thnx for taking me on this ride

            • Goldfinch60

              My pleasure Suresh, our dreamworlds are wonderful.

            • PoeticBiscuit

              Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get away for a bit!

            • dusk arising

              You've lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective, rejuvenated (?) a stroll in dreamland... let it take you where it will....
              .... where's the harm in it - but don't fall in the river.

              • Goldfinch60

                I daren't fall in the river - I can't swim!

                Thanks for your understanding d a.

              • Christina8

                An acrostic well done, sir! wonderful read.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Christina, very much appreciated.



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