Need.
And the moment dawned when need
shattered convention
danced on wrought patterns of
unspoken intention
and we gently kissed.
And the time for yielding arrived,
steel clamps receded
and colour invaded dull monotone
as love's lamps lit shadows
in folded lives.
And warmth of affection started
new fiery sparks
while unused satisfaction
crooned forgotten ballads
to lonely hearts.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Beautiful loving write Fay, innocence moving on into love.
So good that you liked the read and thank you for your review. You comments are always gratefully appreciated dear Andy - -
not only tender, but tantalizing too and so very satisfying right at the end, where you would most want it to be... N
Your review shows you enjoyed the feel of this read my friend - glad too that you liked the last stanza - thank you so much for your discerning comment.
A fine write Fay. It's started me off crooning. No one can bear it, but it can't be helped! heehee.
Hope your crooning lights up lonely hearts dear Orchi - -- thank you for your visit and read.
Thanks FAY for another beautiful Love Poem ! It rings a bell with Me because all Ladies need LOVE and to be LOVED ! being separated from my beloved Brian for over a Year (except for two precious visits) has been hard - but our love has been so strong that we have both remained FAITHFUL - Honest ! He is staying with me for a week when he comes in October ! We will have the Apartment to ourselves because RUTH is returning to England the week before ! So Brian tells Me we will live your LOVE POEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
V 1. Unspoken intention !
V 2. A Time for yielding !!
V 3. Fiery Sparks for lonely Hearts !!!
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
So glad you found my love poem a mantra to live by when you meet up with your darling again - - what a wonderful blessing lies in wait for October dear Angela - a date to look forward to when two sweet hearts will be lonely no more.
Passion, unbridled - that's the majic of your words.
Ah - thanks for grand compliment Suresh -- - and another big thank you for dropping by and reading my verse on love's unfolding.
You are the champion of romantic recollection. Beautiful phrasing held me from line one..... i was there, and those last three lines speak of the longing in any still single romantics very soul.
Is this becoming a habit because this is another for my favourites.
You are a master at writing kind comments and thanks for your visit and read.- - if the poem was clear enough to draw you into the scene I am sincerely grateful and another huge bunch of thanks for including the write in your list of faves - -
I agree with Da, you are the champion of romantic writes! An excellent read from beginning to end!!
If it pleased your grand romantic palate then I am happy - thank you Christina.
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