Lovely
I’ve got this brother.
He’s lovely.
Really is.
Especially when,
He looks me dead in the eyes
And his mouth turns up into a smile
And I see the twinkle in his eyes
When he tells me to kill myself.
But I promise you,
He’s lovely
Really is,
Especially when
He tells me to do those things.
Because,
He knows what’s best for me.
He knows exactly how I should do it,
And why I should do it
And when I should do it
And where I should do it.
He knows
What’s good for me.
Truly lovely
He is
Especially when
He says those things to me
And joins the chorus
Of the rest of these voices
Who are just as lovely as him
Inside my head
That push me closer and closer
Towards the edge.
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Author:
The_C_sides (
Offline) - Published: August 6th, 2019 12:58
- Comment from author about the poem: iIm rambling a little, I know. But it’s out now, and now I feel a little notebook ok about it
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
Got me there in the beginning
First of all, welcome to MPS! This is a really good but tragic first write. Your brother doesn't sound 'lovely' to me. I hope you continue to write and share your talents...
Your brother has obviously not got your love for him in his heart. He should be supporting you and loving you. Just show your love for him and he will be better.
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