you leave me senseless
and a little bit breathless
when you do what you do to me
I'm left flying high and free
The thing that you said to me
yesterday, blew my mind in every way
Maybe I'm just a lucky woman
You leave me senseless
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ..and quite possibly rendered unable to write meaningful poetry it seems.....
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You may be left senseless but your words make sense to me Christina.
Thank you Andy I very much appreciate it!
Love thrives when it is appreciated and your verse certainly gives meaning to that with phrases like -"flying high and free" - - Good rhyming too......................... Fay
Thanks Fay, it is appreciated!--Christina
I dont think you could get more meaningful...
tis so very easy to relate to these words...
it also sounds like you had a whole lotta fun....................... Neville
Thank you Neville....i so appreciate your kind feedback!....C
I am almost overcome, whereas you are more than welcome....
I’d have to agree with the others and say you’re wrong. This is actually really great! Been waiting on your post all day!
Well I appreciate that ever so much!
....senseless, you say, no neither you nor your words, so poetically written.
Thank you Suresh, I appreciate your warm review!--Christina
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