Senseless

Christina8

you leave me senseless

and a little bit breathless

when you do what you do to me

I'm left flying high and free

 

The thing that you said to me

yesterday, blew my mind in every way

Maybe I'm just a lucky woman

You leave me senseless

 

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 6th, 2019 23:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: ..and quite possibly rendered unable to write meaningful poetry it seems.....
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
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Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    You may be left senseless but your words make sense to me Christina.

    • Christina8

      Thank you Andy I very much appreciate it!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Love thrives when it is appreciated and your verse certainly gives meaning to that with phrases like -"flying high and free" - - Good rhyming too......................... Fay

      • Christina8

        Thanks Fay, it is appreciated!--Christina

      • Neville


        I dont think you could get more meaningful...

        tis so very easy to relate to these words...

        it also sounds like you had a whole lotta fun....................... Neville

        • Christina8

          Thank you Neville....i so appreciate your kind feedback!....C

          • Neville

            I am almost overcome, whereas you are more than welcome....

          • PoeticBiscuit

            I’d have to agree with the others and say you’re wrong. This is actually really great! Been waiting on your post all day!

            • Christina8

              Well I appreciate that ever so much!

            • Suresh

              ....senseless, you say, no neither you nor your words, so poetically written.

              • Christina8

                Thank you Suresh, I appreciate your warm review!--Christina



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