Wasted

sylviasearcher

 

Waste of time
Yours? Mine?
Waste of space?
No resting place

 

Pointless
Peculiar
Pathological
Pained

 

Waste of a rhyme
Poetic crime?
Waste of a face?
Lost cause and case

 

Futile
Forlorn
Fucked up
Forgot

 

Waste of breath
Self-propelled mess?
Waste of life?
Sweet sharp knife

 

Dreaded
Dying
Darker
Dead

 

Waste of tears
All your fears?
Waste of words?
Eulogy deferred

 

Waste of woe
Waste of foe
Waste of friend
Dead end

 

End-ed

 

End

 

Dead

 

End

  • Author: sylviasearcher (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2019 06:29
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 58
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  • Neville

    say it like ya mean it why dont ya

    this reads more like self loathing in its own write , rather than just depression...

    Of course not liking or loving oneself often also goes hand in hand with depression...

    and a whole heap of other affective disorders.. Your words here feel like you are trying desperately to beat a black cloud with a blunt instrument...

    Now from an analytical perspective.. it would be far too easy to arrive at the conclusion you see yourself as both the blunt instrument and black cloud.....

    Whereas I think that is bollocks... You are a very talented writer who needs to learn how to format poetry such as this to make it sit better on the page...... My rant is over... sheesh, do I love the odd rant..... Neville

    • sylviasearcher

      Iโ€™m not sure I even understand what you were ranting about.

      This website does not lend itself well to formatting

      • sylviasearcher

        I have tried and tried for it not to centre and failed and failed

        Perhaps we should take something poetic from my inability to achieve satisfactory alignment?

        • sylviasearcher

          Okay so your instruction worked. My poem is satisfactorily aligned but this Poet May never be lol

          • Neville

            well I feel better already...

            • sylviasearcher

              Phew!

            • Poetic Dan

              Hit my spot today, thank you!

              • sylviasearcher

                If thatโ€™s your spot too then hugs to you x

              • Suresh

                No, no dead end yet, if we can put out words like this,,,,,,

                • sylviasearcher

                  Thanks but still uncertain ๐Ÿ˜

                • Michael Edwards

                  Forget the format - it stands up as it is. Super work.

                  • sylviasearcher

                    Well o did fiddle with it under the guidance of Neville lol.

                    Thanks for not thinking this one was a waste of time ๐Ÿ˜Š



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