Let the voices in

Poetic Dan

Once we have learnt
Time to make it our own
No one else is on our throne
Forever listening to the souls
Never forgetting as we go it alone


I think I know who they all are, you don't know when but one day you'll hear a voice from within. Not that one that is you but the one that's you but not you!


It remains you of all the reasons why things happened like they did, every seven years this will repeat.


The past is the past and its never forgotten, it's just neededs a tea and biscuit knowing all was forgiven.


Maybe that's why in two cycles, you can know a lot but on only two wheels it's easy to fall. When you've done four cycles it should be no problem at all, maybe it's just in the way we were shown.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 9th, 2019 02:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just more thoughts! Inspired by you
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 26
  • User favorite of this poem: Joker Light.


  • Fay Slimm.

    Great quote Dan with which I truly agree and your verse well poems the help inner voices can give to those trying to deal with who they really are.

    • Poetic Dan

      I forgot the "in" must be because they are all here, nobody else but me!
      I found myself and now have great company.
      Always appreciated
      Have a fantastic day

    • Andrew Charles Forrest

      peaceful easy feelings
      Great Dan

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you my friend
        Always appreciated

      • Joker Light

        The quote is from The Group? Who are they?

        • Poetic Dan

          Well technically its tagged on Pinterest will the 1111 movement but as for the group, that's me & you or any music we listen too.
          An amazing crew!
          Thank you for joining

        • sylviasearcher

          I always enjoy your thoughts Dan!
          How are things?
          I love your hopefulness and faith.

          And that quote, well it was exactly what I have always believed but never read before 🌈

          • Poetic Dan

            Yes, I found a few and it was hard to choose but this quote was the one that felt very fitting.

            I am really good and continue to be greatful there's not many lows more, all things changed when I no longer talk just with my pen.
            No swollen toung from all the biting, if you know what I mean.
            Hope you are well, one of your last writings hit the spot on a wobble day.

            Thank you for sticking around with us 😉

          • dusk arising

            May that quote sink deep into your every fibre so that you live it without wearing it.

            • Poetic Dan

              I'm sure it will my friend and many the emotion of today continue to be a coat I put on to remind myself of brighter days are always to come.

            • Suresh

              And now at peace, your inner voices of serenity, can reach your conscious self.

              • Poetic Dan

                Absolutely the journey forever continues
                Always appreciated

              • Goldfinch60

                Profound thoughts Dan, you are in a wonderful place in your life now.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Yes, I should and will appreciate it more 😉

                • PoeticBiscuit

                  Did you say you needed a Biscuit?

                  Jokes aside, this was another good one. Voices can be good or bad depending on the mindset it’s in.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Mind, body and soul, let it all go! Have a biscuit and enjoy the show!
                    Always appreciated my friend

                  • Laura🌻


                    An exceptional write and choice of quote and music! I enjoyed reading the poem in its entirety! I especially liked...

                    ...‘but one day you’ll hear a voice from within. Not that one that is you but the one that’s you but not you!’ ...

                    With each writing, you’re shining more and more everyday! 💫Let that shining star 🌟 forever guide you!


                    • Poetic Dan

                      All these awesome souls around make me feel like I don't touch the ground, I hope you see today's as you are among many that never leave my mind.

                      Always appreciate seeing your name!

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