Pretty white petals
Innocent intricacies
To the girl
Who plucked
Creative complexion
Intriguing melodies
To the one
Who looked
Inhale and taste
Drunk on haste
Softly lingers on lips
Like a lover’s lasting kiss
Appearances deceive
Reality is make believe
Love burns bleeds and paralyses
Poison permeates pretty disguises
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Such sweet sorrow in these lines I sense a pain longing to end
Excellent portrayal of suffering S
BRAVO!
There was a mixture of things going on when I wrote this and pain was definitely one of them.
Thanks for your kind words
I told her not to eat that plant - it's poisonous! (ooh. lol).
I used to always pick these. I never ate them...
This is intoxicatingly good, you just wont believe it....
Neville
Of course I won’t
Sure took me from glee to gloom - fine write.
Haha mission accomplished
Hello sylviasearcher,
A superb write with vivid and evocative imagery.
Keep writing
FineB
Thank you fine b
A potent though gloomy look at what "love" does to some - -wonderfully alliterated throughout - thanks Sylvia for wording such pain so realistically.-
Ahh thank you Faye. Potent is exactly the feeling
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