There's been rain nearly every day
The smell it brings washing away
You can't look up eyes get beat
Walking round with soggy feet
The only thing you can ever do
Keep moving forward with a tune
Let natures flow carry through
Until the sun brings back the new
Finding the rainbow that's inside you!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: So much inspiration all the time, in my life and from you. Sorry I have not kept up with replying because I never like being short and each one of you give me so many words, I'd spend forever multiplying! In so grateful for your time and hope you like this rhyme as it is yours and mine!
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Thanks for sharing DAN - Love the video very stimulating & doggy ! Love the POEM but in essence it reminds us that without RAIN there are NO RAINBOWS - without SORROW there is NO JOY etc etc ! As you say "If we keep moving forward - we will always find a RAINBOW !
Love the VISUAL & QUOTE ! That is our Mantra too
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Always glad to know my writings are well received and we see the good in the bad, bad in the good!
Have a great day
Much peace and respect
A fine write Dan. Are them dogs named Fido? Are they '18+ watchdogs', like my non-existent dog is?!
Not meaning their age, but barking if poems are not marked 18+ where they should be.
Nope yours is the only one and I would never even attempt to train him 😉
A wonderfully inspiring image you chose to head your poem today Dan - we certainly do need all our energy for supporting the positive - - good thoughts my friend.
Yes knew it was a keeper when I saw it but didn't know what to write. Didn't think it would be like this, always nice to surprise myself lol
But what’s at the end of the rainbow?
Jokes aside this was a lovely write Dan. We all could use some rain to help us find our inner rainbow.
Yes, I just had to go through all the changes to then step out from them all. Rain does not need to be painful 😉
Always appreciated
What a positive message. No rain where I live, so it's nice to see your point of view! More rainbows in your world than in mine, lol. Great quote too! Thanks for sharing the positivity in your life, Dan! Much respect....Christina
Great rain in Briton lol you never know what you'll get and then it will always be gone.
Thanks for listening always appreciated
Wonderful words and the last line is so true. We all have rainbows within us.
Even when the traffic hits!
Always appreciated
Now there's a thought.. nice one too..
Appreciated from the other side of the pond
I think we are on the same side of the pond... maybe...
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