Snow White dove trapped in a cage,
Within a basement, no sun, only shade.
Flickers of sunlight in tiny little rays,
The dove only knows darkness not the beautiful day.
Left here to wither, gracefully dying,
Slowly forgetting the feeling of flying.
Till one day a young girl with a wonderful heart,
Took the lock off the cage and broke it apart,
Opened the window and out went the dove,
Sometimes all we need is just a little bit of love.
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Author:
PoeticBiscuit (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is a metaphor for my relationship. I once was the trapped dove. Hope you enjoy.
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Fly free in love PB, fly free in love.
That’s what I intend to do. Let the beat of her heart be the rhythm of my wings.
You can beat an egg, and you can beat a carpet.. but you just can't beat a bit of freedom can ya........
Nicely penned my friend.........
Neville
Thank you for reading. Freedom comes in many ways. All are equally important.
A lovely write PB.
Thank you orchidee!
So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was. And then complaints and cruelty follow. Control freak syndrome.
Very well versed here. You are producing truly excellent pieces Biscuit.
Thank you. I really appreciate it. Honestly I do.
A great read with a wonderfully happy ending! All you need is love!
One of the most powerful forces in the world.
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