Dirty Margarita
At first the three
Green olives
Threw me slightly
Whereas the
Salt caked rim was
Usually a dead giveaway
Forget fake news
Tonight
We are talking forgery
Right now tho my second
Dirty Margarita is going down
Far too fast and hard on me
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: am gonna let these words speak for themselves.... N
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Neville,
Your words are speaking very well for themselves! I’ll savor my very dry three olives martini while you down your ‘second Dirty Margarita’...
slowly is my suggestion!🍸
~Laura~🍸
Thank you Laura, a much appreciated visit and true.... Oh' and yes, I much prefer slow.. they last longer that way.... N
...the slower,
the more satisfying...😉
Your tales always speak for the reader to judge and forge their opinion on subject or scene - this drinking too fast and hard I presume had to stop at the news that faked were those green-olive Margarita concoctions. Make mine a port wine every time.........Fay
I quite enjoy the occasional port too... but try to avoid Plymouth.. I have too many family there... thanks Fay.. and true...
Ha ha - your comment gave me my first smile of the day mon ami ........... Plymouth indeed !!!
I like this quite a bit. As always, your work beguiles.
You may come again sir.. many thank you's .... Neville
I won't 'go there' in my sheltered life. Just to say - you met her? Margarita?! heehee. No, no, Fido, no barking. It's a poem about drinking, I suspect!
Thank you Orchidee.. I think we both know what these words are about... Give Fido a pat on the back.. N
Perfect. So well written, Neville!
Can't thank you enough ... Christina8..... bless ya .... N
For she is a beguiling seducer adorned in her finery. No visible promise of later for the easily ensnared.
I Enjoy the drama in your writing Neville.
Ah' but you make it all the finer for the embellishments you bestow upon me & kindly ...,. Neville
May the third Margarita go down slowly so that enjoyment is everlasting.
cheers mate.... N
Hi Neville,
I loved your Dirty Margarita!
Im a Pina Colada girl myself.
Keep writing FineB
Cheers, will do..
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