From a Certain Distance
Her beauty
From a distance
Was comparable with
The setting of the sun
Withdrawn
And going down
On me yet available
To all and each and everyone
From a Certain Distance
Her beauty
From a distance
Was comparable with
The setting of the sun
Withdrawn
And going down
On me yet available
To all and each and everyone
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Beauty from a distnace can be so magnificent and from a distance IS available to all.
Short, pithy and a sure masterclass in telling so much with such paucity of words - - - she of the widely available beauty should read this and wisely digest its meaning........ great read Nev.
thank you Fay for your well reasoned and encouraging words... N
A fine write N. You heard my singing from a distance? Preferably 11,000 miles away, or however far away Australia is?! heehee.
maybe even further.... cheers.. N
Ohh \'Fly me to the moon\' *sings*. It\'s said some of us were already on the moon, to greet the astronauts 50 years ago. heehee.
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Hahaha! Great one!
cheers Dan ..
You 18 plussed it?
I thought it was about the sun?
finger slipped... ta .... N
Ahhhi didn’t think you would 18 plus this one as I know you moan about the ones you have to 18 plus
Great idea is this one, Nevile. Something fishy going on though I beleive....
Thank you Kevin for taking a peek and considering these words of mine, Neville
You're very welcome, my friend..
Ho ho ho, "more tea vicar?"
Sometimes it's best to appreciate the beauty from a safe distance as in Tigeress. Alluring beauty but oh those claws.
You are a fine artist of the word with this cleverly woven double meaning.
Why thank you kindly kind sir but I'm not sure what you mean by double meaning...... 🙂
Well there are those among us who may see a sunset dontcha know. Not that i would dare to suggest such a gutter interpretation myself.
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She sounds classy..wonder how beautiful she was up close....this is beautifully written as always Nev!
You ma'am are far too kind.. thank you Christina.... N
It was my pleasure....C
The mind from which they came is yours
The mind that enticed to decode is mine
Then how can I be accused of being dirty!!
I would never dream of suggesting that of you my friend... tis all the others (LoL) thanks for stopping by.... N
Neville,
“From a Certain Distance”
So many interpretations
with this intriguing write!
Let me just say...
from East to West...
and all the rest!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura!
thank you for viewing Laura... Neville
My pleasure!
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