are you gonna catch me
if i fall?
i know you're waiting
in the shadows
i see it in your smile
read it in your eyes
it's my demise
but are you gonna catch me
if i fall?
waiting for my heart break
yes i know, yes i know
you......always there.
me...........wasting time
a troubled care
with an open mind
seems.....
i can do nothing wrong
seems.....
i can do anything
my love is taken
but she cannot see
just how do i manage
this conspiracy
living two lifes
with just one soul
speaking no lies
no lies,..... no lies
but are you gonna catch me
if i fall?
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Author:
dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Another of my old songs from 1990's.
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Comments5
the last line is a question we all want answered before we fall in love. Brilliant. I echo the thought of those before me that I would love to hear it sung.
I think this is probably the best song i ever wrote because there are so many ways to interpret it. It would be great to hear it sung by an accomplished artist.
I think so too!
Different time, deep emotions. Rebellious.
Well sung
Yes, long time ago Suresh. I'm enjoying my trip down memory lane with these old songs. Thank you.
Super write, so emotive but remember this, if you do fall we are all here to catch you.
Thank you Goldfinch, thats reassuring...... i'm hoping for a bright future with a little help from my friends and the specialist too.
I got a tune in my head but would love to hear the original version... seems like a great song to me......... very catchy.. kinda.... N 🙂
You hum it son, I'll follow.
Thanks Neville, this trip down memory lane through my old song book is quite rewarding. I'm certainly enjoying reading the reactions. There's a few more to come.
shall keep my eyes open....
Nice
Thank you Sindhuja.
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