It's four weeks today I can't help but say
I'm like a rocket inside waiting to display
New beginning this chapter will bring
As together we'll mix the music within
Learning from her sister not to much screen time
Listening to her big brothers that vegetables are fine
For they many not know it yet but this new light is a big reset
To take back the control of our own unique happiness
Each one of has a gift that needs nutrients to grow
Each one of us is a soul not just for web videos
This validation and pride that lives deep inside
Never needed anyones permission to find a smile
Our confidence grew when we took that first step
The ability to see life as a beautiful wonders place
Each and every new soul will learn more than I'll know
The only thing I have to do is continue my loves flow
In the end I'll pass on leaving my ripples to fade
Knowing their light is written within every page
You'll still find me here or the smile on your face
As I'm in harmony with all the choices I've made
An open display with no hidden shame hoping to leave a mark to remember my name.
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Poetic Dan (
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A fine write and clip Dan.
Always appreciated my friend
Thank you
A write full of positive vibes - keep up the fine flow of love for self and for everyone Dan - - - good read.
I shall try my best but after writing this I did fail my test. Today is a new one and I'll keep doing my best!
Much peace and respect
Always appreciated
Hello Mrs Dan. What a wonderful bump you are carrying and you carry it so well. Sympathy with you in the discomfort of these late stages. Soon be over.
Well done Dan, finally let us see the mothership. The one who has made finding your true worth well worth the soul searching you have put yourself through.
Your words just filled me up with joy always appreciate your delightful views.
Thank you my friend and I'll pass that message on when she's finished resting!
Wonderful positive write Danb such a magnificent change has come over you and I am so pleased for you. Your newborn will obviously come into a family of wisdom, humour and that most important that of love. Love is all.
Andy
Thank you my friend but I had a major lesson 5 minutes after posting this yesterday, sadly it won't let me publish my writing today?
Always appreciated my friend
Much peace and respect
wow.. not long now.. what a great way of keeping check.. and also a great way of remembering point of interest along the way..... N
Technically it would be in the next week or so, or later. It's all up to the little lady 😉
Always appreciated
🤗
Thanks for reminding me of the brighter side of life this morning
I can feel your excitement and joy in this one. It is intoxicating.
What a lucky baby!
Thank you so much intoxicating is a wonderful thing to hear!
I hope I can keep it up as it won't let me post my next writing for the second day....
Oh no!? Message Julian? Is that his name? I had some glitches yesterday too...
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