THIS POEM & SONG IS DEDICATED TO ANGELA ~ I MISS SO MUCH !
HOURGLASS MOVES SO SLOWLY !
COUNTING ALL THE MINUTES
AND THE HOURS ~ AND
THEN THE DAYS ~IS
THIS THE PASSAGE
OF TIME OR JUST
AN ILLUSION
WILL I
WAKE
UP &
SEE
SHE
HAS
GON
HAS
SHE
SEE
UP &
WAKE
WILL I
AN ILLUSION
OF TIME OR JUST
THIS THE PASSAGE
THEN THE DAYS ~ IS
AND THE HOURS ~ AND
COUNTING ALL THE MINUTES
HOURGLASS MOVES SO SLOWLY !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN 💙💙💙
I should explain for new readers ~ that ANGELA is my Fiancee
and that she has been on a Work Exchange (Physiotherapist) in
New Zealand for over a Year. It is 11,500 miles from London so
I have only been able to visit her twice ! She really loves NZ
so I am pleased I encouraged her to go ! I am flying out in
OCTOBER to bring her home to ESSEX (UK). She has shared
an Apartment with her Friend Ruth who is a Radiographer
they have been a great support for each other. I have family
in AUCKLAND as does RUTH. RUTH is returning to ESSEX in
September to be married ! ANGELA and I are getting married
at Easter in 2020 ! Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
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Author:
ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 21st, 2019 04:41
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Thats a clever piece today.
May the sands of time run true for you two and bring you the finest of rewards.
Thanks DA pleased you enjoyed it ! *FORM* poems are an interesting genre and best posted in upper case to emphasise the overall form ! I have added ELVIS (Unchained Melody) please check ~
Thanks BRIAN 💙💙💙
I am sure you are both counting those minutes dear Brian - - a fine form and style in this poetic expression of the slowness of time.
YES INDEED FAY ~ I (Brian) find time always seems to move at a pace contra to the pace you desire ! Always accelerates when on holiday and decelerates when one is waiting for an important date like October or Easter 2020 ! Pleased you enjoyed the presentation !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGEL💙🧡💙🧡💙
If time goes quickly when one is enjoying oneself - don't listen to my singing, or time will go even slower! heehee.
Thanks UNCLE STEVE ~ very droll ~ there is a PLACE & TIME for everything ~ AMEN.
Blessings & Joy for you and your Soggy Doggy
Please try and keep Fido out of my FISH POND !
Yours as always B & A💙🧡💙🧡💙
I have to be honest with you. I did not read the poem. My eyes kept being drawn to the optical illusion of the hour glass that your writing formed. This was a great piece.
Persistence is key
THNAKS ZION ~ Form Poems do add an extra dimension to a POEM and are very intriguing ! Pleased you enjoyed it !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Your in JESUS ~ B & A ~ 💙🧡💙🧡💙
Clever write. October (great month) is not long away, only 936 days.
Beautifully composed- I wish you both the best!
-Lauren xx
Thanks LAUREN pleased you enjoyed it. We do our best with our poems and like to have Pictres and Music that will complement them ! We are both ELVIS FANS ! Thanks for your good wishes !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
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