ANGELA & BRIAN

TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM !



 

THIS POEM & SONG IS DEDICATED TO ANGELA ~ I MISS SO MUCH !  

 

HOURGLASS MOVES SO SLOWLY !

COUNTING ALL THE MINUTES

AND THE HOURS ~ AND

THEN THE DAYS ~IS

THIS THE PASSAGE

OF TIME OR JUST

AN ILLUSION

WILL I

WAKE

UP &

SEE

SHE

HAS 

GON

HAS

SHE

SEE

UP &

WAKE

WILL I

AN ILLUSION

OF TIME OR JUST

THIS THE PASSAGE

THEN THE DAYS ~ IS

AND THE HOURS ~ AND

COUNTING ALL THE MINUTES

HOURGLASS MOVES SO SLOWLY !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN  πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

 

I should explain for new readers ~ that ANGELA is my Fiancee

and that she has been on a Work Exchange (Physiotherapist) in

New Zealand for over a Year.  It is 11,500 miles from London so

I have only been able to visit her  twice !  She really loves NZ 

so I am pleased I encouraged her to go !  I am flying out in

OCTOBER to bring her home to ESSEX (UK). She has shared 

an Apartment with her Friend Ruth who is a Radiographer 

they have been a great support for each other. I have family  

in AUCKLAND as does RUTH. RUTH is returning to ESSEX in

September to be married ! ANGELA and I are getting married

at Easter in 2020 !  Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘   

 

 

Comments6

  • dusk arising

    Thats a clever piece today.

    May the sands of time run true for you two and bring you the finest of rewards.

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      Thanks DA pleased you enjoyed it ! *FORM* poems are an interesting genre and best posted in upper case to emphasise the overall form ! I have added ELVIS (Unchained Melody) please check ~

      Thanks BRIAN πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

    • Fay Slimm

      I am sure you are both counting those minutes dear Brian - - a fine form and style in this poetic expression of the slowness of time.

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        YES INDEED FAY ~ I (Brian) find time always seems to move at a pace contra to the pace you desire ! Always accelerates when on holiday and decelerates when one is waiting for an important date like October or Easter 2020 ! Pleased you enjoyed the presentation !

        Blessings & Peace & Love
        Yours BRIAN & ANGELπŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™

      • orchidee

        If time goes quickly when one is enjoying oneself - don't listen to my singing, or time will go even slower! heehee.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Thanks UNCLE STEVE ~ very droll ~ there is a PLACE & TIME for everything ~ AMEN.

          Blessings & Joy for you and your Soggy Doggy
          Please try and keep Fido out of my FISH POND !
          Yours as always B & AπŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™

        • ForeverJesus6

          I have to be honest with you. I did not read the poem. My eyes kept being drawn to the optical illusion of the hour glass that your writing formed. This was a great piece.
          Persistence is key

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            THNAKS ZION ~ Form Poems do add an extra dimension to a POEM and are very intriguing ! Pleased you enjoyed it !

            Blessings & Peace & Joy
            Your in JESUS ~ B & A ~ πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™

          • Goldfinch60

            Clever write. October (great month) is not long away, only 936 days.

          • Silkseduction

            Beautifully composed- I wish you both the best!

            -Lauren xx

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              Thanks LAUREN pleased you enjoyed it. We do our best with our poems and like to have Pictres and Music that will complement them ! We are both ELVIS FANS ! Thanks for your good wishes !

              Blessings & Peace & Joy
              Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™



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