My Chest it Flutters
Oh' how my chest it flutters so
As though a nest of fledgling doves
Reside therein
My heart it hath not danced so much
Since I was but a virgin girl
Oh' so many many moons ago my love
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: August 23rd, 2019 02:48
- Comment from author about the poem: for all you young virgins out there & you not so young ones too, time goes so very quickly, so take my word for it.. get ya finger out .. N
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments6
I can't hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have concerns over your hitherto masked menopausal transsexuality until i read your author's comment.
Next time i pass the girls high school i shall carefully listen for juvenile coo-coo-ing.
Certainly had me scratching my smiling head today.
thanks DA
thank you kindly DA..
Glad someone's enjoying themselves! heehee.
thank you kindly...
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc. but knowing why it is again happening shows a love that does not give up - a delicately worded verse of time flying and thanks for the read dear ageless friend..........
thank you kindly Fay.. Neville
And how so many Moons away are there sat to discover the futility of ones life..This is a cheeky one though I must say...
thank you Kevin..
That heart fluttering first feeling was enhanced by the growth of love throughout life.
Thanks Goldie... N
Neville,
Metaphorically rich...
an enjoyable read...
indeed!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura... N
My pleasure!😊
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