COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧑 A PANTOUM

ANGELA & BRIAN



 

FRIENDS ARE ONE OF THE GREATEST BLESSINGS ~ WE CAN HAVE !

 

AL OF US ~ face conflict ~ whether great or small

So count your many Blessings ~ name them one by one

Do not be discouraged ~ Friends will help you when you fall

It really will surprise you ~ just how many times you*ve won !

 

So count your many Blessings ~ name them one by one

Please dont envy others with their Fancy Homes & Cash

It really will surprise you ~ just how many times you*ve won

Think what LIFE can offer ~ if you*re not too FLASH !

 

Please dont envy others with their Fancy Homes & Cash

Count your many Blessings every doubt will fly

Think what LIFE can offer ~ if you*re not too FLASH

And you will be contented as the days go by !

 

Count your many Blessings every doubt will fly

Do not be discouraged ~ Friends will help you when you fall

And you will be contented as the days go by

ALL OF US ~ face conflict ~ whether great or small !

 

Thanks for reading ~ comments please ~ Love ANGELA & BRIAN  πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

 

This PANTOUM (Classical form of Poetry in which each line is repeated)

is a secular version of the well known HYMN ~ Count Your Blessings ~

Name them one by one !  The HYMN is included in the VIDEO ~ ENJOY ! 

  • Author: ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 26th, 2019 01:29
  • Category: Reflection
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  • orchidee

    A true wrote B&A. I got no blessings to count with Fido always barking though! heehee. It's not his fault - people should mark poems 18+ where need be!
    A reading and talking dog? I could make millions with him.

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      THNAKS UNCLE STEVE ~ Pleased you enjoyed it. Never underestimate a DOG. FIDO is what the Police call a *Tracker Dog* He can track down the unsuitable and inappropriate (for young People like Angela & I !) on MPS ~ Such Dogs are marvelous ! Angela & I have scant reason to use the 18 button ~ but if we did and neglected too designate it FIDO would go BARKING M*D. A friend of mine has a Ma in Law like FIDO ! She instinctively know if FRED has committeed a misdomenour ! In our opinion FIDO is worth his weight in CHUM !

      Blessings and JOY for You & Wonder Woof !
      Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

    • Nafis Light

      It's cool, it's nice, and it's great.

      Pantoum...that's a word I didn't hear a for long time.
      Never heard of it being verbally mentioned...but I do remember studying it.

      Back then, I was really into poetry and spent time reading and experimenting on the different types of poetry (classical and invented) on shadowpoetry.
      The website has explanation and examples.
      That's where I first found out about Pantoum.

      http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/pantoum.html

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        Thanks J44 (cool logo) Pleased you enjoyed the Presentation. I (BRIAN) studied English Literture at School and we were trained to understand (and use) Classical Forms of Poetry including PANTOUMS and the importance of repetition in POETRY ! ANGELA was educated in an English Public School in London so she too has a good understanding of Classic English Language & Literature ! Thanks for the link. Angela & I try to promote Classical Poetic Form ~ OK

        Blessings & Peace & Joy
        BRIAN & ANGELπŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™

        • Nafis Light

          So you basically studied them in school...something which I, back then, seriously wanted to study but never got to.

          Cool!

        • dusk arising

          Yep I couldn't agree more. The sentiments of this piece are in my very make up.

          • ANGELA & BRIAN


            Thanks DA ~ pleased it ticked your BOX ! In the Developed Countries (UK - USA etc) in the 21st C many poeple who have *everthing* still grumble about having *nothing* ! Even though we are 11,500 miles apart (and 11 hours ~ its 4am in NZ !) we can still SKYPE every day and count our Blessings in so many areas ! Friends of mine support a Church in Lethoso where the average annual wage is only Β£1000. They have so little (relatively) but my Friends say when they visit they are always Spritually Happy and always Count their Blessings DAY BY DAY ~ AMEN !

            Blessings abundant & Peace to All
            Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™

            • dusk arising

              Well, for christians it seems very convenient for a lot of them to forget "it is easier for a camel to pass through the eye of a needle than for a rich man (money wise) to enter the kingdom of heaven". In Bristol, there are more churches per square mile than anywhere else in U.K. which is the result of slave traders attempting to buy their way into heaven by financing the building of a church. The Roman Catholic christian church is the wealthiest organisation on the planet... according to google. Dual standards abound in christian churches.

            • Christina8

              Your poem is so true! We all have blessings without being rich in the monetary sense......thanks for sharing!

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                Gracias CHRIS - In your case we are preaching to the converted. Compared with the few material possessions we have - Our Spiritual Blessings are infinite ! Pleased you enjoyed the Presentation !

                Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
                Muchos Abrazos y Besos
                Amor en el Spirito Angela y Brian
                🧑 πŸ’™ 🧑 πŸ’™ 🧑 πŸ’™ 🧑

                • Christina8

                  Blessings to you and yours!

                • Suresh

                  Be content while always aspiring

                • Goldfinch60

                  Very good write A and B. Our blessings in life are priceless and cost nothing.



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