The Journey.
I saw him again just prior to summer.
Allure shook itself teasingly
out of his smile.
I silently almost expired as he sauntered
towards me
with ill-concealed macho-ease
which pulled me bodily behind him into
the coffee-shop.
I stopped to repeat
under my mantra-soaked breath " I can,
because I think I can"
and the love-trap cell door snapped shut.
(to be continued)
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: August 28th, 2019 03:16
- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of fun-play with words - written a while ago - hope you enjoy.
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Delicious springs to mind..... N
Thought you may think this one tasty my friend...................... x
If this is continued, I fear I shall swoon..... heehee. Doh, I'm always in a swoon! lol.
Oooh - do hope you dont swoon too soon dear Orchi - the next instalment should be soon enough - - ha - thank you for your visit and comment my friend,.
One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing new postings from poets i have come to respect for the quality of their many poems i have read. In your work today i am delighted for i haven't seen you produce anything like this before and i love it!
Well that last line is a real hook! All your readers will be waiting with baited breath for the poor girl's downfall and heartbreak now.... or have you twists and turns the poor girl will wrestle with as you tease us into submission?
hmmm breath baited!
Ha - - your fancy matches my own DA - in that we like a bit of excitement amid the reams devoted to issues of the serious - am pleased you enjoyed this bit of fun-write - thank you lots for your encouragement.
Super job acheived within you and I hope you enjoyed your coffee...
Ha - -- well maybe I will Kevin - -we will see soon eh ? - many thanks for your read and comment.
Looking forward to the continuation....so far this sounds fun!
Yes - so good to lighten up sometimes Christina - so many issues for poets today can be serious so I thought I would write a bit of fun for a change......... thank you muchly for your visit and coment my friend.
Ooooooo FAY - You are a Naughty Lady raising a Girls Libido and posing the question *Did they or didnt they ?* Then sudden closure and TO BE CONTINUED ! WHEN ? I have cooled down now and of course theres no point in being HOT when BRIAN is 11,500 miles away (too far for too long !) BUT by October it will all be ober for ever - AMEN - TO BE CONTINUED !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ANGELA🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Ha ha - - naughty but nice sometimes methinks is to write yourself into situations which border on gentle erotic - - so pleased the read gave you a smile and perhaps a temperature rise in your wait for October dear friend............. hugs for you both..................... xxxx Fay
Has that love ever escaped?
Ooooooh - - now that would be telling my friend......... ha ha.
Delightful
It is scary, the trapping effect of the appealing gender. Loved your description.
Thank you for the visit and comment Chris - - - this is part of a trilogy with a twist in its end.... hope you enjoy all three.
I noticed, and they do fit perfectly, each of the two first leave you in suspense.
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