Come to sea

Poetic Dan



Self Discovery seems to never end, it just gets easier to travel back to the beginning.

 

There will be those that lift you up, there will be others that knock you down.

 

Anyway you look at it, up is the only way to go. We are our own unique flow, inspired by many present and past souls.

 

Feel the bass and rhythm of the drum, let the snare snap you back to where life begun.

 

To live is to perform the art from our soul, with a spirit that won't quit no matter what unfolds

 

We are the answers not glitter and gold, when using self reflection to let go of what we were sold.

 

Just take a walk to the water to remember your name, it was not given and it can't be taken away.

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 2nd, 2019 10:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just penning my journey and thoughts, knowing I'm living and that is enough. Longer than most have in the world.
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  • Clara

    '' To live is to perform the art from our soul, with a spirit that won't quit no matter what UNFOLDS ''

    This... I love this. I may make it my new motto! Excellent. I keep repeating it outloud to myself. Letting it sink in!

    CLARA X

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you ever so much, I did read your amazing art last night but was to tied for words but I'm sure they are in the reflection of mine.

      I got inspired from here to get tattoo on my both arms that reads "enjoy the journey while your here" "live in love let go of fear"

      I did a poem for it somewhere lol, this is a great place to be. Thanks for joining in
      Much peace and respect

    • Goldfinch60

      Good positive write Dan. You know that you are now on your journey to a wonderful future.

      • Poetic Dan

        Always appreciated my friend

      • kevin browne

        Each time I get to read your work it appears to deepen into a philosophical exploration of wonder, growing in personality and character, a thriving environment which is almost like the Alice In Wonderland" film. You now cherish from the path you put yourself on and I now look back at your work from a year ago and there is no comparison to it as you write today. A gift from above, you'll never let us down, a battle you have found, but the battlefield you stand in now you hold the belt around your waist equipped with the tools to win the day. Your soul has grown into a beautiful being with the intentions of reaching out to people and to show your hand is held out because you've turned into a wonderful man and with a gift to express your inner thoughts of how your mind can control the direction in a positive life which indeed you have achieved. Topman in my opinion.

        • Poetic Dan

          Wow reading this first thing is helping my foggy brain, voices saying I'm losing it again!
          A reflection well needed, thank you so much for your time and understanding my friend.
          Have a great day



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