We should draw the line
A line under us
Use solid black ink
Erase the thought of us
If you reply you agree
I will crumble I will bleed
For my suggestion was not truth
It was a crying request of you
To say you could not lose me
To say you feel it too
To say I have your heart
To keep it safe for you
My soul deep down it's begging
It's begging to be free
We keep it tied
We keep it trapped
We are blind to the truth
Braced in a battle
Together back to back
We are deceiving
We are wrong
Yet my heart loves you much too strong
Please don't leave me
Please don't go
Without you I will stand alone
I can't face the confrontation
The answers I'd have to give
For my soul it disapproves of me
And I can't lose me too.
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Author:
Clara Ipsum (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 2nd, 2019 10:36
- Category: Love
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Comments2
There is no way that your soul could disapprove of you when you can write such a loving plea straight from your heart.
Thank you as always.
Reading comments on my work really helps. In fact, reading yours just there, I felt an overwhelming surge of self forgiveness.
Take care
CLARA X
Wow.. So open and so pure, the only one you need stands in front of the mirror. As sir gold said above, your words are a treasure and not just for us.
I saw myself in the start of this writing and the changes I have been through, emotional and raw keep going to find your hardcore!
Thank you as always!
I'm so pleased you can relate to my words and draw your own interpretation. It's also very nice to know we aren't alone in feeling these emotions.
Take care PD
CLARA X
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