Our Crescendo

Clara

You pull yourself against me

Push my hips to meet your core

You rise to the sound of my breath

Lost in complete ardour

Your hands they find my curves

Leaving a trail blaze of goosebump flesh

My peaks they harden pushed up tight against your chest

Your teeth they bite down on my neck

My hands are braced against our rest

Together... we move

In sync our dance has begun

My eyes they implore you

As I crash against your shore

The passion has consumed me

Our hearts are ajar

We reach our final symphony

The notes are quite high

Our dance is lost in surrendering fervour

For inhibition was left outside the door

My back it arches as we take our final step

Our eyes our hearts they lock together

Time pauses at the crescendo

... 

We take our final bow. 

 

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  • orchidee

    Glad someone's having fun there - or some ones! heehee.

    • Clara

      Haha! Thank you for your comment. You always respond with a little bit of humour 🙂

      CLARA X

      • orchidee

        I make myself swoon, even, at even a hint of 'hotness' in poems. Call me 'Snowflake'. lol.

        • orchidee

          I make myself swoon, even, at even a hint of 'hotness' in poems. Call me 'Snowflake'. lol.

          • orchidee

            Oops I had to say that twice for some reason. The laptop went mad, trying to delete one of my two (identical) comments.

            • Clara

              Oh haha, bless you!

              Well I try to keep the 'hotness' in my words more implied than in-your-face. I find the subtlety in reading between the lines more effective than crude words that scream at you to see how hot it is haha! Oh I am rambling now!

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful sensual write Clara.

              • Clara

                Thank you for reading and commenting. Always appreciated.

                CLARA X

              • Neville

                what a delicious pre breakfast bit of nicely crafted erotica... certainly gave my appetite a considerable boost this fair mane..... Neville

                • Clara

                  Thank you! I'm not a fan of in-your-face erotica, I find that the subject should me more subtle. Something that is seen underneath the surface of the words.

                  I'm pleased you enjoyed it! I don't often write in this genre.

                  CLARA X

                  • Neville

                    maybe, but you do it well...

                  • dusk arising

                    Beautifully expressed 'the dance of love'.
                    Wonderfully crafted emphasis of love resounding from each line and not a hint of leudness present.

                    Probably the finest description of this i have ever read.

                    A must for my favourites.

                    • Clara

                      Oh! This has made my day!

                      Thank you so much for your kind words. I am honoured.

                      I don't often write in this genre and I didn't want it to be too in-your-face. I find it needs to be hidden just under the surface of your words to work...

                      Again, thank you so much!

                      CLARA X

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      Such a discrete description of physical love - - the lines tumble sensual words without being crude and bring to crescendo a beautifully intimate moment. Well crafted and thank you - into my favourites with this one Clara.

                      • Clara

                        Hi Fay,

                        Thank you very much for reading and commenting on my poem! It means a lot and to receive such lovely and encouraging words! My day has been made. Thank you.

                        CLARA X

                      • Suresh

                        .....tango, your words a Latin erotica.....

                        • Clara

                          Hi,

                          Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂

                          CLARA X

                        • Alan .S. Jeeves

                          'OUR CRESCENDO'....
                          allows one's imagine to ~ imagine;
                          No need to spell things out to those who can spell ~ No need to show those who are able to see ~ No need to preach to those who are able to hear.

                          I will read you poem often, that's a promise (No need to make promises those who are able to understand)

                          Kindest regards, Alan

                          • Clara

                            Oh thank you Alan, I'm honoured! So very pleased you enjoyed it. Always appreciate people stopping by to read my little poems and take the time to comment.

                            Take care
                            CLARA X



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