Five years have passed since we split
Yet my love for you has never quit
To say I’m doing fine would be lying
The loss of your love feels like dying
I miss you morn and night time too
Tears run down my face as I think of you
Missing your sweet love in every way
If only I could’ve convinced you to stay
Will the broken heart ever stop hurting
The promise I failed has torn me apart
The loss of your love is worse than ever thought
If only you could know how sorry I am
My dream is someday you’ll love me again
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Author:
Jeffrey Roy (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 5th, 2019 04:20
- Comment from author about the poem: A small poem I penned quite a while back, yearning for a return of the love that I lost
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
Amazing! How the anguish shows.
Five years and still nurturing hope. May she read this and come running back. If not, maybe time to move on. Good luck.
Oh there's such feeling and raw emotion here... Lost love or unrequited love is surely one of the worst feelings to endure. The loneliness it brings forth.... Oh your poem may have sent me down memory lane a little...
Wonderful words Jeffrey.
CLARA X
Good Raw write that channels how a Heartbreak is the worst feeling ever.
Unfortunately once you love someone you'll always love them.
They say a man only learns how to love after a loss.
The good thing about that is that moving forward you become a better man.
Good Luck.
Such an emotive write, passed loves can be so hard to forget.
Beautifully sad
Much peace and respect
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