laying down the scissors
she paused to watch
the blood slowly congeal
he wouldn't care how she
liked to step outside the moment
and slow things down
he never had
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dusk arising (
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I thought this may be about someone cutting themselves having a sharp pair of scissors, while cutting off bacon rind or something!
I suspect it's deeper - theme makes me shudder!
Intriguing write, had to read it several times in different ways. Good thought provoking write d a.
A most beguiling read D. that leaves me wanting a sequel. A deep and meaningful feel to between these few lines - - -
this is bril and I am not talking fish.. brevity at its poetic finest.. so much said and so many ways to interpret... now said enough...... Neville
... and does it matter now anyway
fab 7 lines of intrigue my friend
BRAVO!
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