Poetic Dan

Birdie Dan



One thing to remember when you climb a tree, watch for all the bird poo in between.

 

Once you're up there you'll see why they are too, with the air so clean and a fearless view.

 

Plus the dogs always wish that they could too, one more reason to look up at you!

Comments6

  • dusk arising

    Long time since i climbed a tree Dan, I'm envious.... DON'T JUMP!

    • Poetic Dan

      It will be strange to know that maybe one day but then no I'll be climbing way past old and gray.

      Only jumping I do is in the sea!

    • Neville

      a fun write and a smashing pic /selfie... Happy Sunday....

      • Poetic Dan

        I went with my mug, as you couldn't really see the mutts!
        Always appreciated
        My friend

      • Clara

        Lovely little poem! And a subtle reminder to climb more trees. Why do we stop doing this?! Great fun!

        CLARA X

        • Poetic Dan

          I have no Idea why people do but I always get that look wish they did too or just the grow up attitude. Sometimes age is wasted on us to ;)

          • Clara

            Most definitely. I've a feeling most wish they could join you! Such freedom in youth that we seem to leave behind!

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          • orchidee

            A fine write Dan.

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you kindly

            • Jeffrey Roy

              Well done Dan

              • Poetic Dan

                Always appreciated my friend

              • Goldfinch60

                The view from above is so wondrous that is why when I come back I want to be a buzzard so that I can sail around the air looking down at natures artwork.

                • Poetic Dan

                  I'm so sure you will my friend as you've past many tests this time!



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