february now
ate away her
perfumed
confidence
upsetting fog
of wishful
misdemeanor
where still
blood-stained
truth
sought solace
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amazingly poetic and deeper than might first be imagined I Imagine.... a real little gem sir... N
Thanks Neville, I'm enjoying writing in this vein. How long it will last i have no idea.
Oh, truthfully I had to read this a few times. Really let it soak in. This is actually rather deep I think... I haven't fully grasped its full implications but I'm definitely pondering. Particularly purfumed confidence, wishful misdemeanor and blood stained truth seeking solace... Oh its actually too deep. I'm going to return to this one. I think my lazy Sunday mind is inhibiting my brain a little!
Excellent though. Thank you.
CLARA X
Yes I wanted there to be a bit of a quandary in the readers mind here. Mystery.
Damn, this is deeply emotive. Absolutely loved it.
Thank you AHM pleased you got into its feelings.
Great write DA
February is such a depressing month it would eat away anyone's perfumed confidence
It certainly eats at my resources when i get my heating bills.
Nicely done!
Thanks Dan
You out-best you best with this little gem D - deep and beguiling....................Fay
I'm enjoying writing these little mystery pieces, pleased you liked it, more follow.
This is so deep, I too needed to read it several times in different ways, it is a great piece d a.
There's enough there to read so many stories from ones own imaginings. As you are all poets i know i have an audience possessing very creative minds with which to weave a tapestry of possibilities into the mystery.
Thanks Goldfinch, i'm pleased you liked this one.
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