Don't You Dare Stop Now

Neville

Don't Dare Stop Now

 

Don't you dare stop now

She said

 

Find where I arc then rest your head

Don't leave me hanging by a thread

 

There is a point I need to reach

She begged

 

Beyond which this ache of mine shall come

To a most delicious and welcome decline

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 9th, 2019 01:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: Oh' how I resent that 18 + tick box..
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • Fay Slimm.

    Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a sigh of a read...........................

    • Neville

      That's a relief.............. thanking you big Fay...

    • orchidee

      Fido would have barked if not marked 18+. He's a watchdog, but a pest at times!
      Glad some ones are having fun. lol.

      • Neville

        ya just have to ... cheers..

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that's a new name - -- I'm not very big but I know what you mean dear amigo ............. an smilin' big here though.

      • dusk arising

        Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at the front, looking forward to freewheeling down the other side with you the powerhouse peddler resting your head on her arched back.... but, somehow i cant quite see u on a tandem.
        Then theres the story of the dog who saw a couple on a tandem and threw a bucket of water over them.

        This really is a fine piece Neville, it speaks of that unwritten tryst where lovers truly meet.

        • Neville

          Ha ha ha.. bless ya squire .. always appreciated DA..

        • Christina8

          A wonderful write.....an ache so poetically described!

          • Neville

            Thank you so much Christina.. your time and attention really are most appreciated... N

            • Christina8

              My pleasure most sincerely

            • Alta H Mabin

              Exquisite write, just enough detail to almost "feel" that ache.

              • Neville

                Success.... thanking you kindly Alta.... Neville

              • kevin browne

                You can't get even with this aching pain so don't dare stop writing trying to express it. You captured this moment from your pen and therefore you have reached for the need to be on point. Graet stuff, Neville....

                • Neville

                  Thanks Kevin

                • kevin browne

                  I've sent you a message, Neville, because yours hasn't come through to me. Try to message me again...

                • Goldfinch60

                  Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.

                  • Neville

                    thanking you kindly oh golden one.... N



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