Don't Dare Stop Now
Don't you dare stop now
She said
Find where I arc then rest your head
Don't leave me hanging by a thread
There is a point I need to reach
She begged
Beyond which this ache of mine shall come
To a most delicious and welcome decline
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: September 9th, 2019 01:58
- Comment from author about the poem: Oh' how I resent that 18 + tick box..
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Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a sigh of a read...........................
That's a relief.............. thanking you big Fay...
Fido would have barked if not marked 18+. He's a watchdog, but a pest at times!
Glad some ones are having fun. lol.
ya just have to ... cheers..
Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that's a new name - -- I'm not very big but I know what you mean dear amigo ............. an smilin' big here though.
Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at the front, looking forward to freewheeling down the other side with you the powerhouse peddler resting your head on her arched back.... but, somehow i cant quite see u on a tandem.
Then theres the story of the dog who saw a couple on a tandem and threw a bucket of water over them.
This really is a fine piece Neville, it speaks of that unwritten tryst where lovers truly meet.
Ha ha ha.. bless ya squire .. always appreciated DA..
A wonderful write.....an ache so poetically described!
Thank you so much Christina.. your time and attention really are most appreciated... N
My pleasure most sincerely
Exquisite write, just enough detail to almost "feel" that ache.
Success.... thanking you kindly Alta.... Neville
You can't get even with this aching pain so don't dare stop writing trying to express it. You captured this moment from your pen and therefore you have reached for the need to be on point. Graet stuff, Neville....
Thanks Kevin
I've sent you a message, Neville, because yours hasn't come through to me. Try to message me again...
Wonderful sensual write in a great understated way.
thanking you kindly oh golden one.... N
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