Neville

Best Friends

Best Friends

 

Now we are completely threadbare

I feel compelled to ask

 

What are best friends really for

Answers on a first class post card please

 

Tho I do so hope not

should you eva catch a cold

I would surely lend my hand to hold

 

And should by chance you eva need to holla

I would be your cough sneeze

and your swalla……

 

‘A little bird told me to say that’

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments9

  • kevin browne

    Bless your little poem about friendship adn friendship on means that we can message each other which brings me to thinking why I haven't I receieved your PM to me and why you haven't replied to the 3 Private messages I've sent you. Can you try againg so I know what your innital messge id about. Thank you...Mr Neville...

    • Neville

      cheers Kevin.. message re sent .. do let me know if and when it arrives... N

    • Neville

      Thank you Kevin.. that is very odd... I will send another and look into that...

    • sylviasearcher

      I always like the Plath quote about friendship, you know the one about vomiting?

      I guess a best friend is a safe place to lie your head when you have a cold, or a wobble, or a catastrophe?

      It’s safe because they still see you and love you and they don’t just see the cold or the wobble or the catastrophe.

      I gave my protagonist a best friend because I so wanted one myself... and then...

      • Neville

        Is that a yes then..... cheers sylviasearcher, my friend.. N

        • sylviasearcher

          I didn’t see a question?

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        • orchidee

          A fine write N. Would you say 'fore'er' and 'eva'? I would say the former, cos I lost the 'v' on me laptop. What rubbish will I talk next?! lol.

          • Neville

            dunno ... ya lost me a while back... cheers tho..

          • orchidee

            Was the time you lost me related to me running out of purple pills? Just askin'. lol.

          • Christina8

            I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!....intrigued by some of your replies to it though I may say!

            • Neville

              thoroughly enjoyed is more than this mere mortal could ask for ... thank you Christina...

              • Christina8

                My pleasure!

              • Fay Slimm

                Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took that as my mantra - so if you're ever in a jam - here I am........ ha - - - yet another ol' 'quote....... but I really believe in the message between your lines mi amigo.

                • Neville

                  thank you Fay.. always appreciated... my friend.. N

                • dusk arising

                  I'm such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more. Oh yes i remember, they're the ones who showed their true colours. Not to be sneezed at when in need.
                  Bless your little bird.

                  • Neville

                    Cheers DA my friend.. Little Bird say's hi and best regards.... N

                  • Goldfinch60

                    A best friend is someone who is always there for you in both the goo and bad times, they are worth there weight in Saffron. (saffron is more valuable than gold).

                    • Neville

                      too true in every respect....... respect GF60..



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