I savor our moments
And long for your touch
It's me you enrapture
I need you so much!
Can't tell you how
I quiver when you're near
Just need to hold you
And have you with me here
I know I'm missing a
descriptive metaphor or noun
But you just read the words of
this poem where my love can be found
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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Comments9
You have a very lucky old man..
that's a metaphor for husband or boyfriend, partner or lover by the way... Neville
Yes I know, LOL and thank you dearly for the wonderful reply!
I must agree with Neville - your other half is very fortunate dear Christina - Your talent for word and romantic phrase is shown every time your pen touches paper. Another grand read.
That was really sweet and quite a touching reply Fay! I appreciate it very much!!
Beautiful loving write.
Thank you Andy...much appreciated!!
HOLA CHRISTINA - Gracias por Tu Poema d*Amor ! ANGELA HERE ! Its 8am in NZ and Im just checking MPS before I go to Work (Aquatherapy today - lovely !) Love all you Love Poems becuase they so so reflect how I feel about Brian (El Mio Oso Grande) Only a few more weeks and I will be able to put into action - whats in my MIND and your POEM ! Im quivering thinking about it - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Muchos Abrazos y Besos por TODO !
Love ANGELA y BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
GRACIAS mucho for your loving reply!! I know you will see your big bear soon! Have a fabulous day at work and thanks again, much appreciated!
It's very moving to be shown a piece of work all about you, created in your absence, filled with devotion of ones every moment of missing you and a great depth of love. Yes, your man is a indeed a very lucky and no doubt a deserving fellah.
Thank you so much DA, I really appreciate your kind and wonderful reply!
Those metaphors could make me swoon! lol.
You are so silly Orchidee! lol
Loves rapture
Thank you suresh!!
Sounds like love to me. You certainly must have captured his heart with this one. 🙂
Thank you so much...I sure hope so!
GORGEOUS
Well thank you I do appreciate the kind review!!
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