Christina8

Finding Moments

I savor our moments

And long for your touch

It's me you enrapture

I need you so much!

 

Can't tell you how

I quiver when you're near

Just need to hold you

And have you with me here

 

I know I'm missing a 

descriptive metaphor or noun

But you just read the words of

this poem where my love can be found

Comments10

  • Neville

    You have a very lucky old man..

    that's a metaphor for husband or boyfriend, partner or lover by the way... Neville

    • Christina8

      Yes I know, LOL and thank you dearly for the wonderful reply!

    • Fay Slimm

      I must agree with Neville - your other half is very fortunate dear Christina - Your talent for word and romantic phrase is shown every time your pen touches paper. Another grand read.

      • Christina8

        That was really sweet and quite a touching reply Fay! I appreciate it very much!!

      • Goldfinch60

        Beautiful loving write.

        • Christina8

          Thank you Andy...much appreciated!!

        • tepo

          The flow of the first verse is perfect
          Great writing

          • Christina8

            thank you so much Stevie! Appreciate it so much!

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            HOLA CHRISTINA - Gracias por Tu Poema d*Amor ! ANGELA HERE ! Its 8am in NZ and Im just checking MPS before I go to Work (Aquatherapy today - lovely !) Love all you Love Poems becuase they so so reflect how I feel about Brian (El Mio Oso Grande) Only a few more weeks and I will be able to put into action - whats in my MIND and your POEM ! Im quivering thinking about it - AMEN !

            Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
            Muchos Abrazos y Besos por TODO !
            Love ANGELA y BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡

            • Christina8

              GRACIAS mucho for your loving reply!! I know you will see your big bear soon! Have a fabulous day at work and thanks again, much appreciated!

            • James Michael

              You don’t need to add “a descriptive metaphor or noun”. Your heart shines in this one.

              • Christina8

                Thank you so much, that means a lot! Really appreciated!

              • dusk arising

                It's very moving to be shown a piece of work all about you, created in your absence, filled with devotion of ones every moment of missing you and a great depth of love. Yes, your man is a indeed a very lucky and no doubt a deserving fellah.

                • Christina8

                  Thank you so much DA, I really appreciate your kind and wonderful reply!

                • orchidee

                  Those metaphors could make me swoon! lol.

                  • Christina8

                    You are so silly Orchidee! lol

                  • Suresh

                    Loves rapture

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you suresh!!

                    • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

                      Sounds like love to me. You certainly must have captured his heart with this one. :-)

                      • Christina8

                        Thank you so much...I sure hope so!



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