Fay Slimm

Whisperings.

 

 

Whisperings.


Come my dearling cushion your present
discomfort in my flexibility.
Dive into my dulcet whisperings and let 
me conjour you bliss.
My words will unseal lips with receptors
that pleasure your ears.
Break your closed seal with pianissimo,
and treadle real freedom.
Float in the gentle mellifluous rustle of
seduction's lullaby-sighs.
Lubricate dried-out withered libido as
into my care you slide.
Bend to hear my virtual purring while
desire builds more fervour
In an undertone I will allure you with
solicitous murmurs.
Allow yourself to be malleable, listen
to my ballad of love.
Imbibe gentle overtures then expose
acceptance of proof.
Bedew yourself all over with pliability
and yield, lover, to me.

Comments8

  • Alan .S. Jeeves

    Pianissimo ~ pp.
    Nay, pianississimo ~ ppp.

    Ex animo, Alan

    • Fay Slimm

      Yes the extra ssssssss 's make all the difference to describing a whisper - thank you for looking in and for the lighhearted comment Alan...

    • Neville

      If you keep getting better and better, I shall quit writing... not that we are in any competition but , this is about as good as it gets .. and that's a fucking .. excuse me folks & Fido .....compliment... Brilliant Fay.... N

      • Fay Slimm

        Yah - - Brilliant eh ? - - bet you could do a lot better in gentle erotica but am loving the compliment Nev. - - - from me to thee then a big loada thank youssssssssssss ........................ x Fay

      • tepo

        Your virtual purring has me virtually.....
        Use your imagination
        Dried out withered libido???
        My arse
        Grrrrrr

        • Fay Slimm

          Ha ha - you crease me up with your straight-talk comments dear tepo - shall I send you a tablet to help with your virtual............Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr's - - ? Thanks a load for the laugh your comment gave me today and glad you enjoyed the gentle erotica.

          • tepo

            Trust me Fay
            After this read
            No tablets required

          • dusk arising

            LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job on any male here (refreshes the parts other poets cannot reach).

            Disgracefully seductive charms you harbour dear Fay. Keep ya distance siren!

            • Fay Slimm

              Oh My ! - -- D.A. what can o' surprises have I loosened today. - -- a Heineken eh ? ...... and am smiling at being pronounced a Siren - well truth I suppose must out so get ready for my next slice of gentle erotica..... ha ha ......... so pleased to have your visit and comment my friend.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              Good Morning FAY - ANGELA here (11pm Wednesday). I love your - free verse - metered Poems because your sensuous vocabulary is not rhyme restricted ! Yes it does raise my libido but 11,500 miles prevents me from satisfying my desires with my beloved BRIAN ! I love the inuendos in the odd lines - flexibiiy - bliss - pleasure - freedom - seduction - slide - desire - solicitation - ballad of love - acceptance & *YIELD LOVER TO ME* You naughty Girl - Im having to have a cold shower _ before bed and my Teddy Bear (BOO HOO !) Thanks for sharing - a very sensuous Poem for Wednesday !

              Blessings & Peace & Joy
              Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

              • Fay Slimm

                Hi Angela - - thanks a load for your considered opinion on my bit of double-entendre - or maybe twas a bit more than that - - I write sometimes in free verse when the mood takes me and gentle erotica seems to be favourite................ do forgive me though for making your bedtime more tearful than usual.............. so near now that waited for romantic reunion eh ? .......... sending cuddly hugs meanwhile to our special duo.......................... xxx xxx Fay

              • orchidee

                Aww, why is the only purring I hear, is always the cat?! heehee..

              • Bragee

                Wow....
                excellent writing that could melt the strongest of men

                • Fay Slimm

                  My thanks Bragee for your visit and read - - -- am so pleased that you liked my version of gentle erotica.

                • Goldfinch60

                  If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me dear Fay your words certainly seduced me.
                  Andy.

                  • Fay Slimm

                    My humble thanks dear Andy for this very generous review of "Whisperings" - - am glad you enjoyed the language and style.



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