Whisperings.
Come my dearling cushion your present
discomfort in my flexibility.
Dive into my dulcet whisperings and let
me conjour you bliss.
My words will unseal lips with receptors
that pleasure your ears.
Break your closed seal with pianissimo,
and treadle real freedom.
Float in the gentle mellifluous rustle of
seduction's lullaby-sighs.
Lubricate dried-out withered libido as
into my care you slide.
Bend to hear my virtual purring while
desire builds more fervour
In an undertone I will allure you with
solicitous murmurs.
Allow yourself to be malleable, listen
to my ballad of love.
Imbibe gentle overtures then expose
acceptance of proof.
Bedew yourself all over with pliability
and yield, lover, to me.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: September 11th, 2019 03:06
- Comment from author about the poem: My attempt at seduction after seeing the picture - though not sure it would work.
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Comments7
Pianissimo ~ pp.
Nay, pianississimo ~ ppp.
Ex animo, Alan
Yes the extra ssssssss 's make all the difference to describing a whisper - thank you for looking in and for the lighhearted comment Alan...
If you keep getting better and better, I shall quit writing... not that we are in any competition but , this is about as good as it gets .. and that's a fucking .. excuse me folks & Fido .....compliment... Brilliant Fay.... N
Yah - - Brilliant eh ? - - bet you could do a lot better in gentle erotica but am loving the compliment Nev. - - - from me to thee then a big loada thank youssssssssssss ........................ x Fay
LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job on any male here (refreshes the parts other poets cannot reach).
Disgracefully seductive charms you harbour dear Fay. Keep ya distance siren!
Oh My ! - -- D.A. what can o' surprises have I loosened today. - -- a Heineken eh ? ...... and am smiling at being pronounced a Siren - well truth I suppose must out so get ready for my next slice of gentle erotica..... ha ha ......... so pleased to have your visit and comment my friend.
Good Morning FAY - ANGELA here (11pm Wednesday). I love your - free verse - metered Poems because your sensuous vocabulary is not rhyme restricted ! Yes it does raise my libido but 11,500 miles prevents me from satisfying my desires with my beloved BRIAN ! I love the inuendos in the odd lines - flexibiiy - bliss - pleasure - freedom - seduction - slide - desire - solicitation - ballad of love - acceptance & *YIELD LOVER TO ME* You naughty Girl - Im having to have a cold shower _ before bed and my Teddy Bear (BOO HOO !) Thanks for sharing - a very sensuous Poem for Wednesday !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Hi Angela - - thanks a load for your considered opinion on my bit of double-entendre - or maybe twas a bit more than that - - I write sometimes in free verse when the mood takes me and gentle erotica seems to be favourite................ do forgive me though for making your bedtime more tearful than usual.............. so near now that waited for romantic reunion eh ? .......... sending cuddly hugs meanwhile to our special duo.......................... xxx xxx Fay
Aww, why is the only purring I hear, is always the cat?! heehee..
Wow....
excellent writing that could melt the strongest of men
My thanks Bragee for your visit and read - - -- am so pleased that you liked my version of gentle erotica.
If people are not seduced by your words they cannot be alive. Believe me dear Fay your words certainly seduced me.
Andy.
My humble thanks dear Andy for this very generous review of "Whisperings" - - am glad you enjoyed the language and style.
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