Neville

Disinterested

Disinterested

 

I skip from your Internet poetry

To the guns for sale page

Intent on acquiring

Just a moment

Of your

Time

 

One way or another be sure

I shall eventually succeed

Are you interested

Now

?

 

 

Comments11

  • dusk arising

    OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today.

    Your first verse is such an entertainment, but i never wanted to actually shoot anyone who broke my heart/emptied my bank account (yet, but the day is young).

    Verse two is deffo her attention grabber.

  • Neville

    Thank you kindly DA my friend....

  • Goldfinch60

    Yes you can have a moment, but not a moment more.

    • Neville

      that will do nicely cheers sir....

      N.

    • Fay Slimm

      Oh - what a poor love-sick swain you poem for us today Nev. The lady should have but one word of answer to your final question-line and that is a resounding - - -- - YES.

      • Neville

        Thanking you ever so Fay from just over the county border.....

      • orchidee

        Aww, why everyone disinterested when I am about to sing? Why they all run away?!

        • Neville

          No idea.... funny that..

          • orchidee

            Yes, I sing the first word: 'Once...' and they're gone. The whole first line is often 'Once upon a time'.

          • sylviasearcher

            Neville, you know you should keep away from the dark web...

            Guns and sex for sale, you could get taken for a ride...

            • Neville

              the chance would be a fine thing and anyway, I fire blanks these days...

              • sylviasearcher

                I’m not sure the trading standards will assist with purchases made on the dark web?

              • Neville

                candles and josh sticks are okay tho, surely...

              • Andrew Charles Forrest

                Yes we're certainly listening NOW!
                Grat write Nev
                Great for by the way
                Was the HIS and HERS underwear pattern intentional or have I been staring at this damn screen too long?
                Nice one

                • Neville

                  Thank you, you old rascal.... ya noticed that then... I tried going for a thong but the font was too big...... Keep staring, ya never know what might appear.. ......

                • Christina8

                  Awesome write Neville! Yes, I think we are all paying attention now! lol

                  • Neville

                    Good.. well now I shall begin..... thank you kindly C..... N

                  • Bragee

                    Guns and poetry.
                    Poetry and a pistol.
                    Sounds like the title of a book I might like!
                    Good Writing here!

                    • Neville

                      thank you very much indeed... Neville

                    • kevin browne

                      As they say he who draws first from the hip then the bullet will win the day. Your succedding in the seach for attention and the intrest now bit leaves one to tick the box which says yes...

                      • Neville

                        Cheers Kevin my friend, a much appreciated visit....

                        Neville



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