Disinterested
I skip from your Internet poetry
To the guns for sale page
Intent on acquiring
Just a moment
Of your
Time
One way or another be sure
I shall eventually succeed
Are you interested
Now
?
Disinterested
I skip from your Internet poetry
To the guns for sale page
Intent on acquiring
Just a moment
Of your
Time
One way or another be sure
I shall eventually succeed
Are you interested
Now
?
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OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today.
Your first verse is such an entertainment, but i never wanted to actually shoot anyone who broke my heart/emptied my bank account (yet, but the day is young).
Verse two is deffo her attention grabber.
Thank you kindly DA my friend....
Yes you can have a moment, but not a moment more.
that will do nicely cheers sir....
N.
Oh - what a poor love-sick swain you poem for us today Nev. The lady should have but one word of answer to your final question-line and that is a resounding - - -- - YES.
Thanking you ever so Fay from just over the county border.....
Aww, why everyone disinterested when I am about to sing? Why they all run away?!
No idea.... funny that..
Yes, I sing the first word: 'Once...' and they're gone. The whole first line is often 'Once upon a time'.
Neville, you know you should keep away from the dark web...
Guns and sex for sale, you could get taken for a ride...
the chance would be a fine thing and anyway, I fire blanks these days...
I’m not sure the trading standards will assist with purchases made on the dark web?
candles and josh sticks are okay tho, surely...
Yes we're certainly listening NOW!
Grat write Nev
Great for by the way
Was the HIS and HERS underwear pattern intentional or have I been staring at this damn screen too long?
Nice one
Thank you, you old rascal.... ya noticed that then... I tried going for a thong but the font was too big...... Keep staring, ya never know what might appear.. ......
Awesome write Neville! Yes, I think we are all paying attention now! lol
Good.. well now I shall begin..... thank you kindly C..... N
Guns and poetry.
Poetry and a pistol.
Sounds like the title of a book I might like!
Good Writing here!
thank you very much indeed... Neville
As they say he who draws first from the hip then the bullet will win the day. Your succedding in the seach for attention and the intrest now bit leaves one to tick the box which says yes...
Cheers Kevin my friend, a much appreciated visit....
Neville
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