PARADISE ๐Ÿงก ANGELA ๐Ÿ’™ BRIAN ๐Ÿงก A 4 6 4 Sonnet





Could I but fly from EARTH ~ to some new LAND

To walk in PARADISE and stand ~ on some new Golden Strand

And meet a People free from Lust & Greed

Who treat each other ~ each according to their NEED !


A place where exploitation is unknown

And no one has a mean intrusive fobile mobile phone !

A Place where barriers have GONE Black & White Male & Female  ~ ONE

Where everyone is treated like a DAUGHTER and a SON !

A Place where each one lives in harmony with NATURE

Respect for ENVIRONMENT and every Plant & Creature !


The EARTH was like that ~ many years ago

When the *Pace fo Life* was very cool & slow


The SKY ~ the SEA ~ the LAND ~ ALL suffered from POLLUTION !


Thanks for visiting ~ comments please ~ Love ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก  BRIAN


There has been talk of a NEW PLANET to visit should Life on Earth

become over-polluted !  The snag is it is 100 light years away and

it would take 400 years to get there ! However you can taste Paradise

on Earth COME to NEW ZEALAND ~ Love A & B ~๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก          




  • orchidee

    A fine write and clip B&A. Pity about that slight snag. But yep, let's go. When is the next bus? A jolly long bus ride! heehee.
    Someone tried to fool me. They said 'You need the No.7 bus'. I said 'C'mon now, I remember it, I need the No.11 bus; the No.7 goes to Mars'.


      ANGELA HERE - 10:30pm Friday - Now the working week is over ! Space travel for Civilians is a minefield ! Yes the Martian Shuttle is No 7. ยฃ2 million return it takes about 6 months. Richard Branson (makes a lovely Chutney !) tells me Shuttle No. 11 is marketed as a *Magical Mystery Tour* outside the Solar System ! ยฃ5 million for a *ONE WAY TICKET* as they cannot guarantee a safe return ! watch this Space ! If you feel you cant afford a Space Trip I can arrange a Three Week Tour of NZ for only ยฃ5000 ! OK ! Pleased you enjoyed the Presentation !

      Blesings & Joy to YOU & YOUR Crafty Cur
      Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

    • Fay Slimm.

      You make the reasons for a visit to New Zealand very appealing dear duo -- - a place where peace reigns is indeed a paradise.

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        THANKS FAY - Midnight here Im ready fo bed ! NZ has given so so much to me over the last Year that I feel I owe her the odd ODE ! In many respects I will be sorry to return to ESSEX but of course I will be with Brian and our Parents who have supported us financially. I will be living with my Parents until our Wedding in 2020 and will be reunited with Brians Parents & Family and all my Essex Friends. Brian has promised me we will return to NZ either as Tourists or even as Immigrants ! The NHS should provide a month in AUCKLAND for all septagenerians ! Pleased you enjoyed the Presentation !

        Blessings & Peace & Joy
        Love ANGELA & BRIAN
        ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

      • H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites

        Love this!

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Thanks FRIEND ~ Pleased you enjoyed it. We like to add a PICTURE and a VIDEO to the POEM !

          Blessings & Peace & Joy
          BRIAN (UK) & ANGELA (NZ)
          ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™

        • Goldfinch60

          It will not take much for you both to live in New Zealand will it.

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