the milk bar

dusk arising

 

the milk bar
was a strange place
to meet a murderer
better here than the
seven year desert
of heartbreak
she had crossed
would Jeremy recognise her?

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 16th, 2019 04:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville

    Brilliant sir.. and make mine a double in a dirty glass if you would be so kind...... N

    • dusk arising

      Hmmm looks like this one wasn't very popular, maybe my mystery pieces are too bizarre for most tastes.... your taste of course, as demonstrated by your fine works, is second to none. Thanks Neville.

      • Neville

        I thought you did good... very good...

      • Poetic Dan

        Interesting...

        • dusk arising

          Yep, but spooky. Cheers m8.

        • Goldfinch60

          Super write, of course he would recognise her.

          • dusk arising

            But what was she to him? Was she the murderer? The victim's sister, mother wife or girlfriend. Or his parole officer?



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