Alta H Mabin

The hope of a sunflower

 

 

a sunflower smile
on this windy sunny day
with hope of some rain

Comments4

  • Goldfinch60

    Superb Haiku Alta.

    • Alta H Mabin

      Thank you so much, Goldfinch, I just simply adore the form.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Such a splendidly telling haiku again Alta.

      • Alta H Mabin

        Thank you so much, Fay. So appreciate your kind words.

      • dusk arising

        I'm not a fan of mixing arithmetic/forulae to poetry. However yours is cleverly done here with meaningful conclusion.

        • Alta H Mabin

          Thanks so much, Dusk arising, appreciate that.

        • Neville

          surrounded by sunflowers
          but not a cloud in the sky....

          a lovely little haiku my friend.... N



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