a sunflower smile
on this windy sunny day
with hope of some rain
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Author:
Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: September 17th, 2019 00:02
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 12
a sunflower smile
on this windy sunny day
with hope of some rain
Comments4
Superb Haiku Alta.
Thank you so much, Goldfinch, I just simply adore the form.
Such a splendidly telling haiku again Alta.
Thank you so much, Fay. So appreciate your kind words.
I'm not a fan of mixing arithmetic/forulae to poetry. However yours is cleverly done here with meaningful conclusion.
Thanks so much, Dusk arising, appreciate that.
surrounded by sunflowers
but not a cloud in the sky....
a lovely little haiku my friend.... N
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