Outs.
Stretching and shouldering night away a sun crouches
to birth black's ousting
by extra powerful battle with dark's hollowed pouches
then outs in sparkling showers.
Glimmers on sightless horizon reveal light's celebration
while un-trodden dreaming
newly writhing in close-capped life waits inertia's frame
stirring shake before rising.
Open-eyed, naught is over as hinging on less or more,
sun, with slumbering done
now hurries to open the thin partition between yawns
for day more hours has won.
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Fay Slimm. (
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Good write Fay.
Thank you very much Orchi.
Do you stroll the beach predawn, catching the moments words in your hair as the tide draws light from distant horizon. Then home to pen the words of glorious Sol's rebirth that the planet may continue to live.
Reading your flow places pictures in my mind with which to romance.
Ha ha - - well not every day I assure you my friend -- a poet has though an attentive memory for things that have smitten the soul - and for me dawn and dusk hold tied prize.............. thank you muchly D.A. for your kind and very romantic in-put to my little wordings today.......
I share DA's question of ya dear poet.. how else could one possibly shape and mold such exquisitely framed views.........
You know dontcha that poets have a whacking great helping of i-m-a-g-in-ation and what was once seen is never forgotten by minds which are full of wonder at beauty - hope this answers your question mon ami - - - but I did take early and late beach-walks when the sea was at my back-door - - but now having moved I have to rely on imprinted memory..................... thank you for your most welcome visit however dear Nev.......... .......... Fay
Wonderful words about a fabulous time of the day, you may not have been there that day but your words ensured that I was there.
Aloha Fay,
I love my sunrises here in Hawaii (the sunsets too!), but yours sounds so much nicer!
I won't be on MPS as much as I was in the past, but will try to drop in to read some more of your work.
Fred
Aloha to you too Fred,
How lovely to get your visit and comment on sunrise which must be just as beautiful for you in glorious Hawaii as here in Cornwall U.K. - - Nature is never empty of inspiration I truly agree. Thank you for dropping by and be back soon Fred.
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