Waiting

Alta H Mabin

Pretty butterfly
contemplating in the sun
waiting for the rain

  • Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 23rd, 2019 00:40
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 15
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Comments4

  • orchidee

    A lovely write Alta. I don't expect the butterfly is waiting for me to sing. If it hears me, it will fly away! lol.

    • Alta H Mabin

      Or maybe, it will call the rain...thanks Orchidee. x

      • orchidee

        I really must stop insulting cats, you know, saying my singing is like two of them fighting! It's much worse than that (is it?!). lol.

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      • Goldfinch60

        Superb Haiku.

        • Alta H Mabin

          Thanks so much, Goldfinch60.x

        • dusk arising

          Sad that many such human beauties appear to be awaiting stormy weather.
          Maybe they get hurt too young.

          • Alta H Mabin

            Yes, indeed Dusk arising.

          • FredPeyer

            Great Haiku. Today I didn't have to wait for the rain, it started even before I got up and is still going strong. Am now waiting for the sun! 🙂

            • Alta H Mabin

              Ah, you should go dance in the rain, then come back and tell me all about it...



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